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Comment from lyenochka
Racy picture there, Bill. Are you sure they have to be adults first? And why do they even have to when each has both male and female parts? Good 'a' alliteration and using the French to do so!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Racy picture there, Bill. Are you sure they have to be adults first? And why do they even have to when each has both male and female parts? Good 'a' alliteration and using the French to do so!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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I suppose it sucks enough being a worm without having to hump yourself as well. : )
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You used very cute words and very cute imagery with the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You used very cute words and very cute imagery with the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from damommy
Is this really how they mate? Very interesting. I had no idea. I never thought about it. Now I wonder how baby worms are born.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Is this really how they mate? Very interesting. I had no idea. I never thought about it. Now I wonder how baby worms are born.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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I'm guessing it's a natural birth.
Comment from frogbook
That's just kinda yuccy-ha. I'm sure they would think the same of humans. This is very funny and a really clever last line. The master of Wisdom of the Worm.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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That's just kinda yuccy-ha. I'm sure they would think the same of humans. This is very funny and a really clever last line. The master of Wisdom of the Worm.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Thanks, FB
Comment from nomi338
Bill! Are you a voyeur? I never pegged you as a pervert. Come on man, let those two love bugs, (emphasis on bugs), have a little fun in peace, while they get a little piece of action. Woohoo!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Bill! Are you a voyeur? I never pegged you as a pervert. Come on man, let those two love bugs, (emphasis on bugs), have a little fun in peace, while they get a little piece of action. Woohoo!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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I should spray them with the hose..
Comment from Pamusart
Help. The worms! The worms! Actually even though I was a girl, I liked studying insects. We had fire ants, poisonous spiders, scorpions, hula monsters and rattlesnakes. We were in a brand new development and many of them were just in our back yard. I was only three when we moved there. Thank you fir sharing
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Help. The worms! The worms! Actually even though I was a girl, I liked studying insects. We had fire ants, poisonous spiders, scorpions, hula monsters and rattlesnakes. We were in a brand new development and many of them were just in our back yard. I was only three when we moved there. Thank you fir sharing
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Pamusart
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about illicit secret love affairs of two earth worms after entering into a relationship for sexual pleasure; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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This speaks about illicit secret love affairs of two earth worms after entering into a relationship for sexual pleasure; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Thanks, ALD