Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill,to be honest,I think you've lost me this time round. It's all about a worm, yes, I do understand. But then what? Oh I must be thick. I am so very sorry. It's well written, I can see that. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018

Let's begin with the X-men, a Marvel superhero group.
One of the X-men was Logan, The Wolverine.
Logan had super healing powers and could extend claws from his fists.
Military scientists cut him open and coated his bones with a metal known as Adamantium.
So....in this parady, Wogan the Worm becomes The Wormerine.

reply by Ulla on 16-Apr-2018

Ahh,thanks a lot for making it clear.Now I'vwe got it. All best. Ulla

Comment from Ginnygray

Excellent

Intriguing story of a little earthworm who has managed to surprise his counterparts by surviving and displaying considerable strength. The worm research labs, zooniverse and the medical council noticed this ideal specimen and decided to bring him in for study.
To condense this a little, they implant him with a very strong metal to make him a super strength fish hook. The little worm's name is wogon and amazingly has not been able to escape his captors, being noticed recently at Lake Wobegon. Great story in worm world!ð???

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018

Thanks, Ginny

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about bizarre living of a special annelid Wogon Worm at Lake Wobegon, scientists fail to understand how he managed to live; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018

Thanks, ALD

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. Wogon should be renamed Woe-Is-Me! A well woven tale, Bill. I like how you took the Marvel comics fantasy / sci fi context to take a simple worm to a fisherman's dream.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018

When I saw the picture of the worm and hook I thought of Wolverine. Thanks for giving it a look.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Please forgive me for saying this, but this story sounds just a tad bit fishy. You want me to believe that there is a worm that can not only entice a fish to bite him which in turn snags the fish, then the worm can be retrieved from the fish and use over and over again. Has anybody ever asked the worm if he is is sick of fish by now, or do his feelings count for naught. That is what I believe. Poor, poor Wormy.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018

I can truthfully say that I have never given an iota of thought about the life of the worm. He's got a lot of heart (four I think) but not trainable.

reply by nomi338 on 15-Apr-2018

You are a cold hearted man Bill. LOL.

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

This is the first time I have reviewed a story using a worm as the main character of the story. The Lead Worm is looked upon as the hero in the Worm World. I believe children will also love this animal adventure story. Thanks for sharing. Well done.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018

Thanks, nassus, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

This is very clever and cute. Almost like a story for children. Well written. Pretty soon, I will leave this page. Then, I will say wonegon short fior woe be gone. Hehe. I be gone. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018

Thanks, Pamusart