Boyhood
Those lazy, hazy days of summer23 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This Sedoka is so charming, I wish I had a sixer for you. The artwork is perfect for your piece and brings a feeling of nostalgia. Good word choices. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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This Sedoka is so charming, I wish I had a sixer for you. The artwork is perfect for your piece and brings a feeling of nostalgia. Good word choices. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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I am so pleased you enjoyed my nostalgic sedoka and the artwork. It was fun to put myself on the raft, hence the word choices. Rod
Comment from lyenochka
Beautifully expressed! Wish the young boys today could have that kind of experience instead of being tied to keyboards and phones and unfortunately, not at all "tongue tied about girls."
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Beautifully expressed! Wish the young boys today could have that kind of experience instead of being tied to keyboards and phones and unfortunately, not at all "tongue tied about girls."
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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I must agree with you about today?s boys missing wonderful experiences outdoors. Thank you so much for sharing my sedoka and your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Angela Post
I really enjoyed your poem and the tribute to boyhood. I have a 12 year old son and I can see him doing this with a pal. It says a lot about the connection of friends and I like the phrase "timeless circles". The art work fits perfectly. I liked it so much when I re-read it that I changed 5 stars to 6.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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I really enjoyed your poem and the tribute to boyhood. I have a 12 year old son and I can see him doing this with a pal. It says a lot about the connection of friends and I like the phrase "timeless circles". The art work fits perfectly. I liked it so much when I re-read it that I changed 5 stars to 6.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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I am delighted you enjoyed my sedoka so much, Angela. I appreciate even more your rereading it and adding the bonus star. Many thanks for your wonderful praise. Rod
Comment from Swampfox1
Nice poem indeed. All these fancy names they have for poems can be quite confusing. I like the last half of the poem and I can connect to that and I think that most males can somewhat or somehow connect to it. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Nice poem indeed. All these fancy names they have for poems can be quite confusing. I like the last half of the poem and I can connect to that and I think that most males can somewhat or somehow connect to it. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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I am delighted you can so easily relate to my poem and enjoyed it. Many thanks for your kind praise.
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you're welcome
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Writer boys will be boys won't they? They do the boys things like play ball, dish, run barefoot, marbles and all of the other stuff boys do but as you said when a pretty girl comes around their mouthes are left hanging open and they become speechless. And this happens to some of the big boys as well Lol.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Writer boys will be boys won't they? They do the boys things like play ball, dish, run barefoot, marbles and all of the other stuff boys do but as you said when a pretty girl comes around their mouthes are left hanging open and they become speechless. And this happens to some of the big boys as well Lol.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Yes, boys will be boys. Thank you for sharing my sedoka, Mary.
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My pleasure
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Sedoka. Boys are playing anywhere with little things to amaze them for hours on end. They forget the world around them and create their own where they are in charge.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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A very well-written Sedoka. Boys are playing anywhere with little things to amaze them for hours on end. They forget the world around them and create their own where they are in charge.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Thank you for sharing my sedoka, Sandra, and your kind praise.
Comment from karenina
I have so enjoyed these Sedoka poems. So many different themes and each handled so well Yors is so reminiscent of the sweet innocence of youth.
Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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I have so enjoyed these Sedoka poems. So many different themes and each handled so well Yors is so reminiscent of the sweet innocence of youth.
Karenina
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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I am delighted you enjoyed the contest entries. Many thanks for sharing. Rod
Comment from Michael Steinert
I really like this for the contest entry. I certainly invokes a certain amount of nostalgia and the image you picked is spot on. Good luck in the contest and have a great day!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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I really like this for the contest entry. I certainly invokes a certain amount of nostalgia and the image you picked is spot on. Good luck in the contest and have a great day!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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I am delighted you enjoyed my sedoka about boyhood. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Yeah, this sounds like most really young boys. We would rather be fishing or playing ball or something else. I did like fishing and sports stuff, but, I was kind of a nerd. I loved reading and writing also along with coin collecting and rock collecting. I really like this well written poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Yeah, this sounds like most really young boys. We would rather be fishing or playing ball or something else. I did like fishing and sports stuff, but, I was kind of a nerd. I loved reading and writing also along with coin collecting and rock collecting. I really like this well written poem. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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I think young boys have much in common around the world. So pleased you like my sedoka.
Comment from Cheryl Baker
"Boyhood" is a good sedoka poem. The syllable cont is correct throughout and I enjoyed the theme. The picture is great and helps to present your poem well.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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"Boyhood" is a good sedoka poem. The syllable cont is correct throughout and I enjoyed the theme. The picture is great and helps to present your poem well.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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I am delighted you enjoyed my boyhood sedoka and the artwork. Thank you so much for sharing and your kind praise.