Precious Gems
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6 total reviews
Comment from frogbook
Really nicely put together, smooth flowing tribute to the Holy Spirit in his month. Great form to use for this one, turned out perfectly.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Really nicely put together, smooth flowing tribute to the Holy Spirit in his month. Great form to use for this one, turned out perfectly.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Dear frogbook, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from karenina
I love a center aligned Nonet....it presents so beautifully on the page! Your reverent poem/prayer to our Creator is straight from your heart and I can feel that from here. Blessings to you!
Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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I love a center aligned Nonet....it presents so beautifully on the page! Your reverent poem/prayer to our Creator is straight from your heart and I can feel that from here. Blessings to you!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Teri7
This is a very lovely poem you have penned. You used very good words and lovely art work. I only had one question: This confuses me - Creator of Christ
I thought that Christ Jesus was the one that said he would not leave us comfortless. That is when He sent His Holy Spirit to dwell with us. This made me think you were saying that the Holy Spirit created Christ when you said creator of Christ. Maybe sent by Christ would be more like it - just an idea!
love, Teri
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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This is a very lovely poem you have penned. You used very good words and lovely art work. I only had one question: This confuses me - Creator of Christ
I thought that Christ Jesus was the one that said he would not leave us comfortless. That is when He sent His Holy Spirit to dwell with us. This made me think you were saying that the Holy Spirit created Christ when you said creator of Christ. Maybe sent by Christ would be more like it - just an idea!
love, Teri
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. By "creator of Christ," I meant that the Spirit formed Christ in the Virgin's womb, He overshadowed her and Christ was created by their love in Her womb. Love, Donna
Comment from Harold Gardner
Good message, has a very good flow and I think this poem meets the requirements for the contest. The photo is also very fitting intro to your poem. Good job and keep writing.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Good message, has a very good flow and I think this poem meets the requirements for the contest. The photo is also very fitting intro to your poem. Good job and keep writing.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Dear Harold, Thank you for your comments and exceptional rating. Dove
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Awesome Powerful declaration to and about our lead, our guide, our teacher and comforter. He is my compadre, my friend my home'. I love Him and He has proven time and time again how much He loves me. I'm so thankful that God thought EVERYTHING we would need to live in this. Spirit filled life and made provisions as well.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Awesome Powerful declaration to and about our lead, our guide, our teacher and comforter. He is my compadre, my friend my home'. I love Him and He has proven time and time again how much He loves me. I'm so thankful that God thought EVERYTHING we would need to live in this. Spirit filled life and made provisions as well.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Dear Mary, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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My pleasure Dove
Comment from apky
I'll admit I'm no expert at poems. But I did enjoy reading yours tremendously, even if I can't help you with the technicalities of writing something like this.
Excellent work.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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I'll admit I'm no expert at poems. But I did enjoy reading yours tremendously, even if I can't help you with the technicalities of writing something like this.
Excellent work.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Dear apky, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove