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Comment from Cindy McIntyre
So many emotions in your three little lines of poetry. This is a wonderful response to the writing response to the 5-7-5 poem. Good luck in the contest. This is a good entry.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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So many emotions in your three little lines of poetry. This is a wonderful response to the writing response to the 5-7-5 poem. Good luck in the contest. This is a good entry.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Dear Cindy, Thank you for your comments and review. A lot of my spiritual poetry is inspired by Teri7. Dove
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
This is very lovely, and well done the 5-7-5 is perfect and the sentiment is so true.
So much mercy was given at the cross and all our sin past, present and future forgiven and grace given.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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This is very lovely, and well done the 5-7-5 is perfect and the sentiment is so true.
So much mercy was given at the cross and all our sin past, present and future forgiven and grace given.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Dear Roxanna, Thank you for your comments and review. I don't know if you know about this, but this poem was inspired by Divine Mercy Sunday which we just celebrated last week in the Catholic Church. Dove
Comment from karenina
Alrighty then! You had me fooled.... With that title I assumed I'd be looking at and reading about the seashore.... I forgot my metaphors! This is lovely, really. Innocent and full of faith in repentance.
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Alrighty then! You had me fooled.... With that title I assumed I'd be looking at and reading about the seashore.... I forgot my metaphors! This is lovely, really. Innocent and full of faith in repentance.
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. April Fool! (a little late). Dove
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April 13th wishes! (In a good way) ????
Comment from William Ross
A great 5,7,5 for the contest on confessing and getting mercy and grace from the Lord. good luck on this and have a great day
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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A great 5,7,5 for the contest on confessing and getting mercy and grace from the Lord. good luck on this and have a great day
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Dear William, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. A beautiful spiritual thought of how Jesus showers us with His metcy when we confess our sins and become reborn and accepted His grace.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. A beautiful spiritual thought of how Jesus showers us with His metcy when we confess our sins and become reborn and accepted His grace.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Katya
That is really nice! You carry the reader right with you from hoping for mercy to receiving Grace. It has enough real emotion to make the short form work.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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That is really nice! You carry the reader right with you from hoping for mercy to receiving Grace. It has enough real emotion to make the short form work.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Dear Katya, I'm glad that you were pleased with this poem. Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Debbie Pope
Receiving oceans of grace is, like you say, a very simple process. You say it so eloquently in your 17 syllables. You do not need any more words. This is a perfect job.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Receiving oceans of grace is, like you say, a very simple process. You say it so eloquently in your 17 syllables. You do not need any more words. This is a perfect job.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Dear Debbie, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful write filled with grace and mercy and I liked your 5-7-5 poem and wish you luck with the contest, this is like a mini prayer, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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A faithful write filled with grace and mercy and I liked your 5-7-5 poem and wish you luck with the contest, this is like a mini prayer, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of your faith and confession.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of your faith and confession.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Dear Sharon, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove