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Comment from Teri7
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This is very lovely and beautiful what you have penned on your nature walks. You used very good descriptive words and lovely art work. It made me feel so peaceful as I was reading this. Love, Teri

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. Donna
Comment from karenina
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You glimpsed a boat sail! I wanted a lake..or at least a Walden-style pond! That aside the rest was a pleasing ode to nature. Nothing like meandering in the woods to spur introspection!

Karenina

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
reply by karenina on 11-Apr-2018
    Welcome....
Comment from Debbie Pope
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Lovely poem. You really made me see, hear, and feel the woods with your glimpses, snaps, and buzzing. Great descriptive words. Good luck in your contest. This is an excellent entry.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Dear Debbie, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks poet is amazed with the God's goods, beauties in Nature; he enjoys everything living in the woody trail; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
    Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Marisela Contona
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This is a beautifully written piece. Your wording in this piece is well done. Your descriptions of nature are great, relaxing, and calming. The picture matches the topic perfectly, along with your background color.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
    Dear Marisela, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Supe
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This is a very descriptive and enjoyable walk in the woods. You have noticed so much of nature's gifts. I walk every day, some sort of hike, and you have made me look at things in a different light. I like the rhyming and the flow and all of what you see. Good job.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
    Dear Supe, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from meeshu
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excellent nature poem Dove. I can almost smell the pine as I read.
good luck in the NaPoWriMo writing contest. this is an entry that should
do very well.......meeshu

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
    Dear meeshu, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about a walk through a woody trail and all the observations you make while walking. At the end of the trail the sun shines bright and warm down on earth.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
    Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove