Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Bill. This is so amusing and clever. You are on a roll. I give you credit for finding a man's name to rhyme with jellyfishes. Great job with this post. Marilyn

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018

Thanks, Marilyn.

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

This is a clever one, my friend. I was excited to see a series on Jellyfish as they are quite fascinating. I'm sure you will see them as no one else has!

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018

Hope it goes well.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a very cute ballad about the jellyfish, Aloysius. You used very cute wording and great imagery from your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh. I guess it wasn't the super poisonous box jellyfish then. Good that he survived and knows that it's much better to not hold jellyfish of any kind. Glad you're onto jellyfish!

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018

I didn't want to be too dark so I saved Aloysius at the end.

Comment from Cass Carlton

Excellent

I'm very glad he did survive. Jelly fish poison is about as toxic as toxic can get.
There are Australian beaches where, at certain times of the year, it would be very dangerous to swim as there are floods of nasty stinging blobs of goo in the water.
Does Aloysius have any antidote for jellyfish poison? A home grown one is vinegar.
Well, here we go with another lot of poems about odd creatures that most people ignore in favour of "prettier" topics. Well done cheers Cass. ( I still think frogs would be a winner)

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018

Thanks, Cass, for the great review. I?ll put frogs in the hopper.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Great name choice--Aloysius. He should have known better than to mess around with jellyfish. I would suggest he turn his attention to edible jelly--grape, strawberry, whatever his choice. He could eat it and it would never attack him. Glad he managed to survive the bites, though. Great energy and playful presentation. it would sound fun read aloud. judi

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018

Thanks, Judi, for the terrific review. Bill

reply by judiverse on 21-Mar-2018

You're very welcome. judi

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

This is just too funny, Bill. Right off we're into totally unique country ie playing with jellyfishes and then when they did what jellyfishes do, ie sting. It still comes as a surprise.

LOL. Great job with this delightful ballad and I'm glad to hear he survived.

Gloria

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018

Thanks, Gloria, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from cailinraine8

Excellent

Again, very cute and entertaining... the accent adds a further twist of humour and it is a bouncy poem that could be a song.. I can see the banjo, the bouncer, and the Bailey's....

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018

Thanks for the fun review, Cailin.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this cute and clever verse you wrote. The alternate spellings really added depth to this cute read. Well done and thanks for sharing this one.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018

Thanks, Sugarray

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

This poem is a true delight to read and review. A boy used to play with jellyfish. One day they stung his throat. He heard the angels singing or was it mermaids wit a song. It did not really matter though, cause he survived it, don't you know. Written as a true Ballad.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018

Thanks, Ine, for the kind review. Bill