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Comment from dragonpoet
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Good use of repetition to show all the hope sunrise brings to you. It is a new hope in everything good. It could almost be a faith poem

Keep writing

Joan

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
    Hi Joan, thanks for your kind review
    Hugs, Trisha
reply by dragonpoet on 01-Mar-2018
    Don't mention it, Trisha

    Joan
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
    If I don?t mention it, how do you know I?m grateful?
    LOL
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
    If I don?t mention it, how do you know I?m grateful?
    LOL
reply by dragonpoet on 01-Mar-2018
    I just assume every one is grateful. It is what we are here for. To help and encourage each other.

    Joan
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
    I know that! Me being not funny
reply by dragonpoet on 01-Mar-2018
    That's ok. Maybe it's just too early for me to get any humor.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This sunrise is somewhere exotic and it looks peaceful. You paint a beautiful picture of the sunrise, something I never see and always take for granted, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
    Sunrise is supposed to bring new tranquility but in today?s society it brings more dstress of alarm clock time restrictions
    Thanks as always
    Hugs, Trisha