Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Now I shouldn't really laugh at this, but it is pretty funny. That last line is - ahem - a killer.

Nice work with this one. Smooth flowing. Best of luck.
GMG

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018

Thanks so much for the great review, I really appreciate it.

Comment from Beck Fenton

Excellent

You picked the perfect art to compliment your (ahem) tongue in cheek solution that a woman might come to as her children cry for food. I have a slightly bent sense of humor, and this is the kind of horror that I like to write myself. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018

Thanks so much for this great review,I appreciate it.

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Well that was an evil and scary little thing with the picture adding much to the words. That'll teach him! LOL. best of luck in the vote.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018

Thanks for taking time to read and review, I really appreciate it.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Spectacular! Your limerick is not only "predominantly spooky" filled with just the right amount of "horror," it also flows well - which is huge in "limerick land." If it "ain't got the flow; it ain't a go" as my former English professor would claim! I also appreciate your play on words: "Flesh" in a pan. My smile for the day!

Best wishes in the contest!

diane

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

Thank you for such a wonderful review, I really appreciate it.

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

Dear mystery poet
This is an excellent horror limerick. It scans perfectly and the story is exceptionally gruesome. You have my vote. Take care and good luck Jen.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

Thank you for such a great review, I really appreciate it.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Very nicely written Limerick, author. I can see that the pooh boy ended up in the pan. Well a woman's gotta work with what she's got, right?

Best of luck to you in the contest with this gem.

Gloria

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

You're right of course! Women can be very resourceful. Thanks for reading.

Comment from CD Richards

Excellent

When the good book says a woman should cleave to her husband, I don't think this is what it has in mind!

I think I might pass on dinner tonight.

This is well written, and has deliciously dark implications. Well done,

Craig

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

Hahaha. .thank you for reading and reviewing,I really appreciate it.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Limerick With A Twist writing prompt.
Well written, well said, and it has a good twist at the end, filling the horror aspect.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

Thank you for taking time to read and review, I really appreciate it.

Comment from Wetbelly01

Excellent

Oh yeah!... This'll work!
Neat little limerick here...
Nice smooth rhythm and rhyme...
With a horrific subject matter...
No unwanted surprises here...
MY compliments... Good Luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thank you for such a great review, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from Katie Solis

Excellent

I'm glad she got her revenge in the end. Good job in putting a twist into your limerick, and good play on words. Good luck to you in the competition.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018

Thanks so much, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.