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Comment from judiverse
Admirable job of carrying out your alliteration in this. It is Bee-musing. I'll grant you a stretch to put this in the Bee column. I had to put a new battery in my mouse this morning, so I appreciate the good work batteries do. Maybe I should invest in Duracell. This makes an interesting presentation. judi
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Admirable job of carrying out your alliteration in this. It is Bee-musing. I'll grant you a stretch to put this in the Bee column. I had to put a new battery in my mouse this morning, so I appreciate the good work batteries do. Maybe I should invest in Duracell. This makes an interesting presentation. judi
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Energizers / Eveready each emit enough electricity ? ehh?
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I don't worry too much about batteries, except at Christmas, when I have a whole bunch of things that require batteries. judi
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting poem with good use of the letter B in all the words. You used very good words and great imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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This is a very interesting poem with good use of the letter B in all the words. You used very good words and great imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from nomi338
No need, as solar power will eventually power everything we use and the artificial power manufacturers will have to quickly change focus, so that they can maintain their monopoly over everything that we need and use. They will always win because they never play fair.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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No need, as solar power will eventually power everything we use and the artificial power manufacturers will have to quickly change focus, so that they can maintain their monopoly over everything that we need and use. They will always win because they never play fair.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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I feel assaulted by batty
Comment from Gloria ....
Yay, when you said this was a B poem you really weren't kidding. It works, and about one of my favourite things too Bees. ;-)
Can't wait for another of your witty posts. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Yay, when you said this was a B poem you really weren't kidding. It works, and about one of my favourite things too Bees. ;-)
Can't wait for another of your witty posts. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Gloria.
Comment from TPAC
Perhaps, I took this wrong. I thought writer intent was batteries exploding, quote "bye". A creative back hand slap, I found humorous in conveyances. In my opinion of this write a good read.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Perhaps, I took this wrong. I thought writer intent was batteries exploding, quote "bye". A creative back hand slap, I found humorous in conveyances. In my opinion of this write a good read.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thanks, TPAC
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. And no mention of "bitcoin" another B word - probably the beryllium batteries would have more value. Great creation of a poem built entirely of B words so it's beyond alliteration here.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Lol. And no mention of "bitcoin" another B word - probably the beryllium batteries would have more value. Great creation of a poem built entirely of B words so it's beyond alliteration here.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thanks, lyenochka.