Comment from frogbook

Excellent

A clever and enjoyable little gem you have produced here. Very original and humorous with rather ingenious rhyming words.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018

Thank you, FB

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Uh oh, I find I'm reading the posts out of order again. Thankfully in this case it's all good. More smart bees who like to rise above it all.

Most entertaining bees. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thanks, Gloria

Comment from damommy

Excellent

I like the b sounds. The names Helium and Shelium are perfect. He and she. 8-)

Good rhyming. Great photo to go with it.

I'm loving the bees.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thanks, da

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Danger! Danger! If one of those bees gets his stinger too close to one of those hot air balloon thingies, bam! Pow! That balloon will come tumbling down, but because the bee can fly, he might be able to just fly on away from there unharmed, but scared witless no doubt.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Bee behinds burst balloon bazaar

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A sweet and hilarious poem, helium and shelium, perfect names, your poem is buzzing with colourful balloons, good luck with it Bill, you made me smile again, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thanks, Dolly

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent writing. Bill. The artwork is perfect for the subject you wrote about. It is a really cute picture. The poem is simple and well-written. Nice work.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thanks, PBB