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Comment from Rebekah Lew
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Nice imagery in your poem. I enjoyed the content. I do think this is awkward and I stumbled over its meaning.

Find there had been a raid
His grape fest would be paid

Thanks for sharing your poem, cheers, Rebekah.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
    the raid was the raccoon stealing grapes
    His fest was his feast. If he got caught the ?paid? would be the consequence.
    Hope that helps, thanks for reviewing kindly
    Trisha
Comment from Wetbelly01
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Neat little poem... It's got everything going for it!....
Nice and smooth flow and rhyme... Great subject!....
I don't see any problems with it... My compliments!!

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
    Phew! No problems~ that?s great! I appreciate your review, I?m always glad to hear (LOL read ) from you
    Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Fast food is fast taken for Mr. Racoon is habitual to east fast as if it may be his last; this is well said, well done this fun read couplet poetry. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
    I?m happy you found it a fun read, not everyone likes raccoons! I get challenged by the animation I see. Thanks very much for a very nice review
    Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
    I?m happy you found it a fun read, not everyone likes raccoons! I get challenged by the animation I see. Thanks very much for a very nice review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
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This is just too cute and adorable. You used very cute and good descriptive wording and the video is so cute. Something about raccoons that are adorable too. Great submission for the club! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
    I like them too. It?s always fun, but I?ve been challenged with resizing the videos etc.That is time consuming,and can be frustrating, but the Lord has helped me to this point. Thanks for a great review