Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
Children just being themselves and hanging our at home and I miss those times, your poem reminded me of when my house was filled with laughter, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jan-2018
Comment from
Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Children's Rhyming Poem' writing prompt.
Well done. Good story, very well rhymed.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018