Student forever
a haiku3 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Poetry' writing prompt.
The beautiful poster is a good match as well.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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This is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Poetry' writing prompt.
The beautiful poster is a good match as well.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 27-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Hello Sharon, I appreciate your visit and the kind review; thank you very much and a very Happy New Year to you.
Comment from Ricky1024
is it a 575 writing prompt entry Goldwell red well no grammar issues adjective is Wells objektiv contents were excellent demon imagery present as well as descriptive measures good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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is it a 575 writing prompt entry Goldwell red well no grammar issues adjective is Wells objektiv contents were excellent demon imagery present as well as descriptive measures good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 26-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Glad you like the write my friend, I thank you for stopping by. Could you kindly advise as to why you rated the poem with four stars? And how I can improve or make it better? Thank you.
Comment from rama devi
I love this. Your title drew me in, as it is my guru's teaching that we should always maintain the attitude of a student, just like Christ advised we always be like children (open, receptive, in the moment)...
It sounds very sage-like, as if an enlightened being wrote it. I'm so glad I stumbled on it in Up Next.
And then I saw your note about 'Devi' and wondered...could it be me? If so, honored and humbled! Knowledge without wisdom is indeed like a rhyme without wits. well voiced! And I love how the dash carries the thought through to a conclusion:
Love the alliteration of K and W as well as the flow. Bravo!
The six is for the merit of this poem's meaning and delivery, both. Nothing to do with mentioning a 'Devi'!
Anyway, I reviewed this with blinders. Kindly let me know who you are in the reply!
Namaste
Warmly,
rd
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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I love this. Your title drew me in, as it is my guru's teaching that we should always maintain the attitude of a student, just like Christ advised we always be like children (open, receptive, in the moment)...
It sounds very sage-like, as if an enlightened being wrote it. I'm so glad I stumbled on it in Up Next.
And then I saw your note about 'Devi' and wondered...could it be me? If so, honored and humbled! Knowledge without wisdom is indeed like a rhyme without wits. well voiced! And I love how the dash carries the thought through to a conclusion:
Love the alliteration of K and W as well as the flow. Bravo!
The six is for the merit of this poem's meaning and delivery, both. Nothing to do with mentioning a 'Devi'!
Anyway, I reviewed this with blinders. Kindly let me know who you are in the reply!
Namaste
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 26-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Namaste my friend, again, I thank you for your kind and insightful comments.
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:-))))) Namaste!