Poetry NOOK
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Fun in the Snow"Eclectic style
5 total reviews
Comment from smileycloud
great tanka poem
very fine words
all the form and style stuff is good
you address the image really well
lots of fun as usual
blessings
makes me want to play in snow
no
makes me want to play with the dog
oh what the heck
just makes me want to play
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
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great tanka poem
very fine words
all the form and style stuff is good
you address the image really well
lots of fun as usual
blessings
makes me want to play in snow
no
makes me want to play with the dog
oh what the heck
just makes me want to play
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
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It is said that animals keep you young. This one obviously does, he has energy for long walks needed for health LOL
Thanks, go play !!!! I appreciated your positive review
Hugs, n smiles,
Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
You captured the picture perfectly and I love the words you used to describe the action as it fits perfectly. What a way to enjoy and they say animals don't feel?
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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You captured the picture perfectly and I love the words you used to describe the action as it fits perfectly. What a way to enjoy and they say animals don't feel?
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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I?m lesrning a lot about animals and myths. Behaviour speaks for itself . Thanks for your complimentary review
Hugs
Comment from Asem.inspirations
hahahahahahahaha - yaaaaaaaaaay - this dog certainly knows how to have great snow fun. He makes it look so fun that I want to join him in this running game. I remember snow days like this one with me and my sisters. There is nothing like the old days. I can tell you that. This is a great and fun filled post. It does my heart a lot of good.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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hahahahahahahaha - yaaaaaaaaaay - this dog certainly knows how to have great snow fun. He makes it look so fun that I want to join him in this running game. I remember snow days like this one with me and my sisters. There is nothing like the old days. I can tell you that. This is a great and fun filled post. It does my heart a lot of good.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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So now I?m your heart doctor too? LOL. I wonder where he got the idea - from watching kids, or being in a sled.anyway it gave me chance to enjoy the picture too - hard to believe, but fun.
Hugs,
Trisha
Have a blessed week
Comment from RodG
I really like this tanka/video combo. I've never seen a dog slide down a hill before. Your poem gives him child-like qualities and you chose good rhymes. This should appeal to all ages.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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I really like this tanka/video combo. I've never seen a dog slide down a hill before. Your poem gives him child-like qualities and you chose good rhymes. This should appeal to all ages.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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Thanks ROD, I?m glad to read that you enjoyed it. These are fun to find ekphrasic material and pen my ?take? on them.i really do appreciate your review.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
What a delightful video and piece of writing Bucketlist. I don't have a dog but your write and the moving gif reminded me of how they used to be. Wonderful write. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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What a delightful video and piece of writing Bucketlist. I don't have a dog but your write and the moving gif reminded me of how they used to be. Wonderful write. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your complimentary review!
Hugs, Trisha