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Viewing comments for Chapter 221 "Aardvark World 6"Animal poetry and short stories
20 total reviews
Comment from brenda faye curtis
I received a message about your Aardvark 8, and decided I needed to see it from the beginning. So glad I did! This is a brilliant reimagining of the island of Dr. Moreau, but to be honest, I first imagined it in a cartoon style. In any style, it's funny, original, and I like it.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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I received a message about your Aardvark 8, and decided I needed to see it from the beginning. So glad I did! This is a brilliant reimagining of the island of Dr. Moreau, but to be honest, I first imagined it in a cartoon style. In any style, it's funny, original, and I like it.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Thank you, Brenda, for checking this out. Bill
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You're welcome, Bill.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I read these out of sequence, but fortunately it only added to increase the enjoyment of your later part. I do love the way they talk, it makes me have to try and interpret the words which is fun! Another enjoyable part, Bill, now I'm right up to date. :) Sandra x
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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I read these out of sequence, but fortunately it only added to increase the enjoyment of your later part. I do love the way they talk, it makes me have to try and interpret the words which is fun! Another enjoyable part, Bill, now I'm right up to date. :) Sandra x
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Thanks, Sandra, for taking a look. Bill
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Hi Bill,
I am no expert on scriptwriting but I like the idea of a menagerie of animal space travellers.
The possibilities for further scenes seem a possibility.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Hi Bill,
I am no expert on scriptwriting but I like the idea of a menagerie of animal space travellers.
The possibilities for further scenes seem a possibility.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Thanks, Shirley. I have a couple more scenes.
Comment from robina1978
Cute picture that complements your script perfectly. I don't know much about scripts, But it seems you at doing them very well. I enjoyed the reading and the reviewing.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Cute picture that complements your script perfectly. I don't know much about scripts, But it seems you at doing them very well. I enjoyed the reading and the reviewing.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thanks, Ine.
Comment from LIJ Red
I thought the Popeye movie (Willams Duvall version) was awful. The best part was the song about Bluto. (He's large) Why does my mind try to assign the looks of Yeoman Rand to Mink? Chekov the bear? Excellent post.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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I thought the Popeye movie (Willams Duvall version) was awful. The best part was the song about Bluto. (He's large) Why does my mind try to assign the looks of Yeoman Rand to Mink? Chekov the bear? Excellent post.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thanks, LIJ. Lots of derivatives from Star Trek.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Bill. Great job and now I have to wait to see what you come up with in the continuation. "ANTartica" and "ANTagonisthst" are off the charts. Marilyn
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Hi Bill. Great job and now I have to wait to see what you come up with in the continuation. "ANTartica" and "ANTagonisthst" are off the charts. Marilyn
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Thanks, Marilyn for reviewing and ANTicipating the next scene.
Comment from apky
A lighthearted jaunt in time and space that made an excellent read. You did a wonderful with accents, Bill.
Afraid I'm out of sixes - this definitely would have got one from me.
Love the sitting arrangement in the briefing room. Each to his own. Trust Lion not to assume the throne, Aaadvark to keep close to his favourite snack, and Mink not to take on that provocative pose!
BTW, swing by mine sometime, won't you?
Warm regards,
Aki
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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A lighthearted jaunt in time and space that made an excellent read. You did a wonderful with accents, Bill.
Afraid I'm out of sixes - this definitely would have got one from me.
Love the sitting arrangement in the briefing room. Each to his own. Trust Lion not to assume the throne, Aaadvark to keep close to his favourite snack, and Mink not to take on that provocative pose!
BTW, swing by mine sometime, won't you?
Warm regards,
Aki
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you, Aki, for the terrific review. Bill (I will check out your poem in a minute.)
Comment from nomi338
Come on Bill, how can you leave me hanging like that? Here I was all engulfed in the story, eagerly waiting for the next development, then bam, one of the most dreaded messages ever, "to be continued..."
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Come on Bill, how can you leave me hanging like that? Here I was all engulfed in the story, eagerly waiting for the next development, then bam, one of the most dreaded messages ever, "to be continued..."
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Really? Engulfed in the story? Gee!
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Yeah. I'm really into it man.
Comment from pbomar1115
On their travel, the astronauts discovered a new, small, cold planet. While discussing what to do about the new planet, amicability may not the whole group's feeling.
Phillip
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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On their travel, the astronauts discovered a new, small, cold planet. While discussing what to do about the new planet, amicability may not the whole group's feeling.
Phillip
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Thanks, Phillip, for giving this a look. Bill
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You're welcome, Bill.
Phillip
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, this is another terrific addition to your Aardvark collection, Bill. You might think about adding a link to the others so folks can go back in time.
Love the characters and the verANTcular. Do not people know Aardvarks must have ants?
Great job my friend, this is funny as hell and totally unique too.
Gloria
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Ha, this is another terrific addition to your Aardvark collection, Bill. You might think about adding a link to the others so folks can go back in time.
Love the characters and the verANTcular. Do not people know Aardvarks must have ants?
Great job my friend, this is funny as hell and totally unique too.
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Thanks, Gloria, for giving this a look. Bill