Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

A good Four Seasons poem. Well written and rhymed.
I tells a good story.
And I love the picture it paints.
Good luck with you competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thank you so much, Sharon, for your encouraging comments.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

interesting perspective you've given old winter here. Poor old bugger, no one really picks their circumstances in life at the outset... doomed to repeat the same things time and time again.

but on the whole, i hate my lot - I?

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks for reading and commenting, giraggmang. I'm not sure what you mean by the quotation, "but on the whole, i hate my lot - I?" Unless you're unfamiliar with the word "lot," in this context (which i doubt). but here's what my dictionary says:
"a person's luck or condition in life, particularly as determined by fate or destiny" So, ?????

reply by giraffmang on 05-Nov-2017

lol, sorry it was the use of the small 'i' I was referring to, which I think should probably be I.

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Aha! Fixed now. (i don't know how you invariably spot these inconspicuous errors.) Thanks!

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the personified winter that confesses the status was given, all the activities that winter takes are mostly per its nature so it is dry and cold but all under the sun; I liked.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks for liking, Alcreator. You got it mostly right.