Comment from closetpoetjester

Excellent

Your quirky poetic style shines through Bill, in this helluva novella bout the fella who liked shoving his umbrella.

Dare I say this could well be a best sella? haha

Well write. Superbella rhymes
Cheers P

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017

Thanks, P.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Bill,

This is a great, fun poem. You did a great job with an interesting rhyme pattern. The story is funny--hopefully not true. I like the inventive spellings. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017

Thanks, Jan

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

A lovely play on the mis-spelling of words that work incredibly well Bill.
You have a unique way of writing that never fails to give me a smile.
Mitchell

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017

Thanks, Mitchell

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hahahahaha. I loved it. As per usual, you just make me laugh so much. Your imagination is just great an combined with your fun writing, my imagination just runs wild. All best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017

Thanks, Ulla

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. But did they serve it with "a shot of gin" in "hella?" Funny and creative rhymes and spelling, Bill! I detest Orange Jello. But your story poem was entertaining!

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017

Thanks, Lyenochka

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Not a sin? Sounds like a win. Maybe Coco was not so loco as he was able to look up a permanent hookup that was very Mella, a none ending source of the nectar called Jella.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017

All ended wella

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a very cute, adult, limerick you have penned. You used very cute and good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Very good job. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Mimi Linny

Excellent

Crazy, fun poem that I enjoyed reading! Loved the imagination in the creation of your rhyming words! Absolutely perfect - made the flow of the poem pretty spot on! Great job!

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017

Thanks, Mimi

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Bill that is a fun, quirky little write I like the monorhyme form throughout. You have a thing about caterpillars hey Bill lol This one's had a heavy life lol
thanks for sharing

dip

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017

Thanks, DD, for the kind review. Once I get to Caterpillar 10, I'll look for another critter to saddle.