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Comment from Dawn Munro
HAHAHAHA! Oh my, your sense of humor amazes me, and the mental images I came up with were unlike anything I would ever try to relate - your poem says it best! (People didn't really do this, did they? Hahahahaha!) Poor, little caterpillar culprits! Horrible enough to be burned at the twig, but did those people have to torture them first?!!! *grinning 'til my face hurts*
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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HAHAHAHA! Oh my, your sense of humor amazes me, and the mental images I came up with were unlike anything I would ever try to relate - your poem says it best! (People didn't really do this, did they? Hahahahaha!) Poor, little caterpillar culprits! Horrible enough to be burned at the twig, but did those people have to torture them first?!!! *grinning 'til my face hurts*
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Dawn. The caterpillars were probably not targeted for punishment; just stepped on.
Comment from nomi338
As far as I can see, the only thin pure about the Puritans is that they were purely ignorant, intolerably ignorant. It is one thing to be ignorant, without a decent education we are all ignorant in one way or another, but there is no excuse to be ignorant and brutally cruel at the same time. Actually, brutally cruel and self righteous all at the same time, which is absolutely unbearable.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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As far as I can see, the only thin pure about the Puritans is that they were purely ignorant, intolerably ignorant. It is one thing to be ignorant, without a decent education we are all ignorant in one way or another, but there is no excuse to be ignorant and brutally cruel at the same time. Actually, brutally cruel and self righteous all at the same time, which is absolutely unbearable.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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The reason Puritans never had sex standing up was because they thought it might lead to dancing.
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That is funny, really funny!
Comment from Possummagic
Lol there's lots to say about caterpillars. I really enjoyed that. Even more to say about millipedes. Did you know that they are born with just a couple of legs and each time they moult they grow a new body segment and legs too. They can grow very long, up to 12 inches. PM
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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Lol there's lots to say about caterpillars. I really enjoyed that. Even more to say about millipedes. Did you know that they are born with just a couple of legs and each time they moult they grow a new body segment and legs too. They can grow very long, up to 12 inches. PM
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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We should be studying them so we can keep getting taller and faster.
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Indeed! PM
Comment from frogbook
Hahaha. This is a clever one and a great new series. Will be be looking forward to seeing what these little guys will be up to. I'm sure you will work your magic.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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Hahaha. This is a clever one and a great new series. Will be be looking forward to seeing what these little guys will be up to. I'm sure you will work your magic.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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Thank you, FB, for the encouraging review. Bill
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, an interesting poem and commentary regarding one of our smallest creatures. Although I didn't understand it all, I applaud the effort and easy construction...
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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In my opinion, an interesting poem and commentary regarding one of our smallest creatures. Although I didn't understand it all, I applaud the effort and easy construction...
Comment Written 19-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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Thanks.
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You're welcome, Bill...Eve
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Bill,
This is a great poem with super alliteration. The use f unusual words doesn't detract form its meaning. The picture is perfect.
Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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Bill,
This is a great poem with super alliteration. The use f unusual words doesn't detract form its meaning. The picture is perfect.
Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 19-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Jan.