Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Yeah, can't imagine them winning any raitheths...!! ;) Whew! No sixteen-legged creatures! And hooray for sloths - of course, my favoritist sloth in the world works at the DMV in the movie 'Zootopia'... lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 19-May-2020

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reply by the author on 19-May-2020

They can beat their personal best.

Comment from schatzling

Excellent

WOW
HOW SIMPLY CLEVER IS THIS.....
I AM TOTALLY HUMBLED THAT YOU SELECTED MY OLD UN PERFECT PHOTO OF MY SLOTH TO ACCOMPANY IT. PERFECT TOGETHER.....
NO NOT YELLING AT YOU....HAVE TO RETURN THIS COMPUTER AND TYPING SUPER FAST....SORRY.
EXCELLENY WRITING,

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017

Thanks for the use of the cool shot and this great review. Bill

reply by schatzling on 22-Jul-2017

My pleasure.

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hello, Bill Schott, :)

LOL! This was very entertaining. I used to chat with a sloth. I mean he used the nick of something sloth. Can't remember what it was now. But I started looking up their images and reading about them. Cool animals.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thank you, Rasmine, for the excellent review. Bill

reply by Rasmine on 19-Jul-2017

His nick was Smokin_Sloth, I remember it now!

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Big surprise. I doubt that a sloth could, in a race with a snail and a turtle would place higher than third. If a sloth were to move any slower it would be standing still. Or at least that's what I have heard.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thanks, nomi

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Thank you Bill for your fun play on words of why the sloth lost.
I needed a good hardy laugh today I'm nothing miss speedy today.
Gert

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thank you, Gert, for the excellent review. Bill

reply by Gert sherwood on 18-Jul-2017

You are welcome Bill
Gert

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Nice photo of this sloth that complements your tiny poem very well. This sloth raced a moth, and loth (lost)
Nicely worded.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thank you, Ine, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

that is ridiculously funny!
Love it.
A happy mind must've thought this up.
This kind of poem is good stress-relief!
You should get lots of positive reviews.
good job.
pome lover

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thank you, PL, for the positive review. Bill

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

He raced against a moth

and he loth...

You are a funny man, Bill, and this and the picture put a big smile on my face.

Thank you, bs

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thank you, yt, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Jay Squires

Exceptional

Damn, Damn, Bill. This is sheer genius. The easy wit of a Shel Silverstein. I mean, could you have been more elementary in your theme. But it's a full banquet of humor in just 12 words. You still rock--and why I don't find your poems in the New Yorker, I'll never know.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thank you, Jay, for the exceptional review. I loved this one as soon as it was done. Bill

Comment from damommy

Excellent

I burst out laughing at this one. LOL LOL LOL

So sloths is the new world. This should be very interesting. 8-)

'He loth' - hilarious!


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 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017

Thank you, da, for the incredible response to this. Bill