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Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Octopus World 9"Animal poetry and short stories
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Can't say that I disagree there -- this one's a bit on the unusual side, but it's good to mix-things-up, yeah?!! ;) Had to change it up -- been through horses and spiders and now octopi... hoping the legs aren't doubling every time... lol!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Can't say that I disagree there -- this one's a bit on the unusual side, but it's good to mix-things-up, yeah?!! ;) Had to change it up -- been through horses and spiders and now octopi... hoping the legs aren't doubling every time... lol!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thanks, Yvette
Comment from damommy
The thought of an eight-pegged legged octopus is hilarious.
Keep 'em coming. I love your poems about the critters.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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The thought of an eight-pegged legged octopus is hilarious.
Keep 'em coming. I love your poems about the critters.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Thanks, da, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
Amen brother. They say that God had a reason for creating every form of life that exists. Okay, I am certainly glad that he created mankind, but I have to wonder about why he created rodents, roaches and some other disgusting creatures that seem to serve no purpose other that to provide food for other disgusting creatures. Oh, and include the fly in that group of deplorables.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Amen brother. They say that God had a reason for creating every form of life that exists. Okay, I am certainly glad that he created mankind, but I have to wonder about why he created rodents, roaches and some other disgusting creatures that seem to serve no purpose other that to provide food for other disgusting creatures. Oh, and include the fly in that group of deplorables.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Thank you, nomi, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the state and status of Octopus that does not talk at all but knows how to eat anything raw around as it uses its eight legs and rule over the creatures; I liked.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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This speaks the state and status of Octopus that does not talk at all but knows how to eat anything raw around as it uses its eight legs and rule over the creatures; I liked.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Thank you, ALD, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Cindy Warren
Awww, poor little octopus! I don't imagine those wooden legs would work to well in the ocean, especially if he's a mimic octopus. I've heard they can re-grow body parts, so you definitely don't want to eat him raw. LOL Thanks for the smile.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Awww, poor little octopus! I don't imagine those wooden legs would work to well in the ocean, especially if he's a mimic octopus. I've heard they can re-grow body parts, so you definitely don't want to eat him raw. LOL Thanks for the smile.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Cindy, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from c_lucas
When it comes to making out, an Octopus has four sets of feelers instead of two. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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When it comes to making out, an Octopus has four sets of feelers instead of two. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Charlie, for the excellent review. Bill