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Act of Endurance

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Dawn of Chaos

23 total reviews 
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
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Hi TPAC

Very sorry but I have to agree with some of the other reviews. I have read your poem but am totally confused as to your message. I'm very confused.
Take care, Pete

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
    I will consider your personal remark, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed view.
Comment from greyson ernst
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lol i love how the people are plants because he has a gardening tool and a deadly weapon really nice poem this should be a short story because what type of poem is this? and as always keep writing and stay safe



sincerely Greyson Ernst

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
    No ideal of type or style, if indeed poetry. Glad certain aspects were appealing to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate.
Comment from Pantygynt
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I imagine English is not your first language. This made little sense to me. I don't know if you have access to a competent English speaker, but if you have I suggest you try to enlist his or her aid. As you can see from the grades in several other reviews, I am not alone in my opinion.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
    No, from outside the planet, trying to fill in gaps in my life, appreciating your generous rate despite flaws.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This is a powerful and enjoyable poem. You do a great job with the descriptions in this poem. Very creative and very enjoyable. Love the details. Great job!

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
    Glad some aspects in this write were appealing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Earl Corp
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This should have been a Halloween poetry contest entry. It really captures the Halloween spirit. Thank you for sharing. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
    I haven't considered that viewpoint, thanking you for that tap, appreciating your thought and generous given rate.
Comment from lancellot
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No, I write is review with no I'll will or intent to insult the author, but this, at least to my eyes, reads like random conglomeration of words, loosely based on a death theme. It is chaos personified. Maybe that was the goal who knows.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
    Not exactly my goal, needing a variety of items to tell a story, thanking you for your generous rate and great shout out.
Comment from January L'Angelle
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I'm not quite sure what I'm reading. It wasn't clear to me. There were a lot of violent words on the page and I think you might have considered a violence warning on here... just a thought. -January L.

 Comment Written 19-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
    No this particular write needs revisions to bring forth its clarity, thanking you for your generous rate dispute those flaws. I welcome your response.
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
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Another great poem with very thoughtful and vivid descriptions. You have a great use of imagery in your writing to present clearly complex ideas. I felt the lines needed breaking up a bit, into shorter lines, but I think that's more personal choice.

 Comment Written 19-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
    No this particular piece needs revisions to enhance its coherency thanking you for your generous rate dispute its flaw welcoming your response.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
Needs Improvement
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This needs some punctuation or for the words to be broken up into more lines. It is very hard to read or to get the meaning of it because of that. If you did that, it would probably be more understandable.

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 Comment Written 19-May-2020


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
    Appreciate the shout structuring is one of my flaws considering your statement thanking you for generous rate and welcomed views
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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A pretty grim chapter with a multitude of names a and terms for one conclusion death ain't pretty and the violent one is the worst. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
    Glad aspects in this read were found appealing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed views.