I Lost the Key
Man loses the key to a woman's soul6 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
Well, how truly beautiful is THIS??? SUCH an original take on this contest, and I love the very thought of a 'key to someones soul.' Oh, but that he lost it! SO sad!! Great entry!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Well, how truly beautiful is THIS??? SUCH an original take on this contest, and I love the very thought of a 'key to someones soul.' Oh, but that he lost it! SO sad!! Great entry!! Blessings...
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from B.B. Rose
This poem seems odd in that how could a guy so sensitive mess up so badly? What did he do? Something more concrete like that would have made it more interesting IMHO.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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This poem seems odd in that how could a guy so sensitive mess up so badly? What did he do? Something more concrete like that would have made it more interesting IMHO.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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I left in vague purposely so the reader could fill in the blanks. Thanks for the read.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Such a sad and tragic poem. It would seem that the key should have been a most prized possession - and it should have been safeguarded. I think you express the sorrow of losing it well.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Such a sad and tragic poem. It would seem that the key should have been a most prized possession - and it should have been safeguarded. I think you express the sorrow of losing it well.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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The key is a metaphor for his poor behavior. Thanks for the read and the comments.
Comment from Poetic Friend
Interesting approach with this contest. Although the key to one's heart is an obvious choice for this contest, your poem brought originality on the subject.
I love the last stanza.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Interesting approach with this contest. Although the key to one's heart is an obvious choice for this contest, your poem brought originality on the subject.
I love the last stanza.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the read and your comments.
Comment from Cybertron1986
The metaphorical implication here expressed a lot emotion, which included regret. I felt this could almost be a song. I loved the process of the short story here. The key was like a gift. And, sometimes gifts, when taken for granted, can get lost. I enjoyed this piece. Thank you
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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The metaphorical implication here expressed a lot emotion, which included regret. I felt this could almost be a song. I loved the process of the short story here. The key was like a gift. And, sometimes gifts, when taken for granted, can get lost. I enjoyed this piece. Thank you
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful read and review. Very appreciated.
Comment from jaded831
Excellent weaving of words. A key unlocks physical doors and metaphorical doors. Your poem is easy to understand, has great flow, and a universal theme. I can see this happening, so it tells a story, as well. Great job.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Excellent weaving of words. A key unlocks physical doors and metaphorical doors. Your poem is easy to understand, has great flow, and a universal theme. I can see this happening, so it tells a story, as well. Great job.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for your review and your kind words.