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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Are you sure 'nine' is the right number here...?!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
Are you sure 'nine' is the right number here...?!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (The spider in the picture has nine legs.)
Comment from Spitfire
Ha,ha. That could get very expensive, but also fun considering the new designer nails and choice of shoes available. Nice alliteration with nine, need, and nails.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
Ha,ha. That could get very expensive, but also fun considering the new designer nails and choice of shoes available. Nice alliteration with nine, need, and nails.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Shari, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from BOO ghost
That creeps BOO out before he goes to sleep. Ha ha! Loaded with humor. There are pros and cons of everything. A real dandy of a poem and picture. Count your doubloon and your legs. This is BOO-terrific!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
That creeps BOO out before he goes to sleep. Ha ha! Loaded with humor. There are pros and cons of everything. A real dandy of a poem and picture. Count your doubloon and your legs. This is BOO-terrific!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thanks, BOO, missing sleep for this. Bill
Comment from Teri7
O.K. Now this is too funny and cute. I never looked at a spider that way and probably never will until now! lol You used very good and cute wording and a great picture of the spider! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
O.K. Now this is too funny and cute. I never looked at a spider that way and probably never will until now! lol You used very good and cute wording and a great picture of the spider! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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PThanks, Teri
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you are so welcome!
Comment from nomi338
That should not be a problem for this clever fellow. Hell just spin your self a fine set of Stetsons, Stacy Adams or even Buster Browns. Moccasins any one?
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
That should not be a problem for this clever fellow. Hell just spin your self a fine set of Stetsons, Stacy Adams or even Buster Browns. Moccasins any one?
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
Thanks, nomi
Comment from BeasPeas
LOL! So true. Nails done and shoe stores could rack up a fortune--but, as they say--it is what it is. On the other hand, they don't have to pay for housing so it's a trade off. An enjoyable 5-7-5. Marilyn
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
LOL! So true. Nails done and shoe stores could rack up a fortune--but, as they say--it is what it is. On the other hand, they don't have to pay for housing so it's a trade off. An enjoyable 5-7-5. Marilyn
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from damommy
Hahahahahahaha! Just what I needed. I love seeing your poems come up. So refreshing amidst all this sadness.
I never thought about them having their nails done. Funny, funny, funny.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
Hahahahahahaha! Just what I needed. I love seeing your poems come up. So refreshing amidst all this sadness.
I never thought about them having their nails done. Funny, funny, funny.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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Thanks, da.
Comment from frogbook
Well that picture just made my skin crawl. Yucci, great and imaginative situations conjured up in the Bill and spider connection.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
Well that picture just made my skin crawl. Yucci, great and imaginative situations conjured up in the Bill and spider connection.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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Thanks, FB.
Comment from Poetic Friend
Bill, I must admit, I can't look at the artwork. It is so creepy.
However, I did enjoy your humor in this poem -- the nail technician will freak out, indeed.
Great usage of word economy. You made every word count
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
Bill, I must admit, I can't look at the artwork. It is so creepy.
However, I did enjoy your humor in this poem -- the nail technician will freak out, indeed.
Great usage of word economy. You made every word count
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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Thanks, PF.
Comment from jaded831
Ha, ha, I enjoyed your poem. It made me laugh, it is always good to start the day on a positive note. Great syllable count, reads smooth, and has comic tone. Everything together gets a thumbs up from me. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
Ha, ha, I enjoyed your poem. It made me laugh, it is always good to start the day on a positive note. Great syllable count, reads smooth, and has comic tone. Everything together gets a thumbs up from me. Excellent work.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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Thanks, jaded, for the positive review. Bill