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8 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
S'okay... maybe she got hers braided...!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
S'okay... maybe she got hers braided...!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (Extensions, right?)
Comment from Gloria ....
That is the thing about fashion, one day it's the "mane" thing and the next it's a passing tale.
Excellent humour, Bill and a fine artwork choice to illustrate your wit.
Much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
That is the thing about fashion, one day it's the "mane" thing and the next it's a passing tale.
Excellent humour, Bill and a fine artwork choice to illustrate your wit.
Much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you, Gloria
Comment from smudge
I love the play on word in this 5/7/5 The word mane. It made me smile as I've seen many of those streaks! They definitely grow out! Best wishes Maureen
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
I love the play on word in this 5/7/5 The word mane. It made me smile as I've seen many of those streaks! They definitely grow out! Best wishes Maureen
Comment Written 29-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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Thank you, smudge, for the grear review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
You almost had me until I realized that it was a painting and not a photograph. The image is very arresting an the thought that I have regarding is that if someone would actually change a horse's natural man color like that with dyes or something, then maybe they should be arrested.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
You almost had me until I realized that it was a painting and not a photograph. The image is very arresting an the thought that I have regarding is that if someone would actually change a horse's natural man color like that with dyes or something, then maybe they should be arrested.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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Is it a painting? That's a pretty good likeness.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. I've even seen shampoo for people using the word "mane" so I think your pun uses a well associated thing. What I don't understand is the purple, green etc colors.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
Lol. I've even seen shampoo for people using the word "mane" so I think your pun uses a well associated thing. What I don't understand is the purple, green etc colors.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Me neither. Horses are too trusting.
Comment from damommy
Oh, bless his heart. Are the other horses laughing at him?
It doesn't look bad at all.
Good play on words, the 'mane' thing.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
Oh, bless his heart. Are the other horses laughing at him?
It doesn't look bad at all.
Good play on words, the 'mane' thing.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Thanks, da. We suffer for fashion.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You always say the cutest things in these horse 5-7-5's. Very good wording and great picture. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You always say the cutest things in these horse 5-7-5's. Very good wording and great picture. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Teri, for the nice review. Bill
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
Never let a pun pass by without a compliment to the creator. Well done, Bill. I love the photo and appreciate your humor. So much serious stuff going on these days it is good to sit back and have a bit of a giggle - Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
Never let a pun pass by without a compliment to the creator. Well done, Bill. I love the photo and appreciate your humor. So much serious stuff going on these days it is good to sit back and have a bit of a giggle - Wendy
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Wendy.