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Comment from Mastery
Hi, Mikey. This is a fun romp. I like your subtle sense of humor throughout. especially at the end though:
" We've found the mother of all oil fields right below Yosemite Deadwood Forest. I guess it's about time, PRIME MINSTREL TRUDEAU, TEAR DOWN THAT WALL!. Looks like Canada may want to make friends after all."
Good job. thanks for sharing. Bob
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Hi, Mikey. This is a fun romp. I like your subtle sense of humor throughout. especially at the end though:
" We've found the mother of all oil fields right below Yosemite Deadwood Forest. I guess it's about time, PRIME MINSTREL TRUDEAU, TEAR DOWN THAT WALL!. Looks like Canada may want to make friends after all."
Good job. thanks for sharing. Bob
Comment Written 04-May-2017
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A great descriptive fade in before we even venture inside 'erth' mikey. You are doing great stories with your scripts, always some humour and some points to make as in this one. Minstrel Trudeau tearing down the wall - great finish.
cheers,
valda
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A great descriptive fade in before we even venture inside 'erth' mikey. You are doing great stories with your scripts, always some humour and some points to make as in this one. Minstrel Trudeau tearing down the wall - great finish.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 03-May-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
All Donald cares about is making money and he doesn't mind who gets hurt in the process. I hope he doesn't get his way. Our planet is in enough trouble as it is. Ahi Dios mio!
Good script, Mike, well done!
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All Donald cares about is making money and he doesn't mind who gets hurt in the process. I hope he doesn't get his way. Our planet is in enough trouble as it is. Ahi Dios mio!
Good script, Mike, well done!
Comment Written 02-May-2017
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Mikey,
This brings me to think of the saying, "In all things moderation." I feel like that is where we are with the media these days, too. Somewhere in between the extreme left and the extreme right there has to be a few grains of truth lol
(I hope!)
You have done an effective dramatization through the dialogue in the script to put the intended message across. You are getting really good at these.
Thanks for sharing!
Kim
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Hi Mikey,
This brings me to think of the saying, "In all things moderation." I feel like that is where we are with the media these days, too. Somewhere in between the extreme left and the extreme right there has to be a few grains of truth lol
(I hope!)
You have done an effective dramatization through the dialogue in the script to put the intended message across. You are getting really good at these.
Thanks for sharing!
Kim
Comment Written 02-May-2017
Comment from Sankey
Now I know why you don't review my stuff anymore even stuff you might have seen before. I have done a loot of editing. This was a good read but of course you are a Libtard, right? HEHE! I love that term.
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Now I know why you don't review my stuff anymore even stuff you might have seen before. I have done a loot of editing. This was a good read but of course you are a Libtard, right? HEHE! I love that term.
Comment Written 02-May-2017
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
LOL oh yes i just heard the news and it is quite unsetteling. YOur piece really made an impression as that is just what may happen to the world now that no one will work. Very well done
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LOL oh yes i just heard the news and it is quite unsetteling. YOur piece really made an impression as that is just what may happen to the world now that no one will work. Very well done
Comment Written 01-May-2017
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again I enjoyed reading your commentary. You did a wonderful job stating an opinion and backing it up with real possibilities. This is a good write.
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Once again I enjoyed reading your commentary. You did a wonderful job stating an opinion and backing it up with real possibilities. This is a good write.
Comment Written 01-May-2017
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hah!
So, our kindly Neighbors up North finally decided to build a wall to keep us Yanks from coming across their borders, 'ey, Michael?
Well, ya can't really blame 'em none now, can ya?
Madrenatura...Mother Nature?
Very clever, heh-heh.
It's unthinkable to me that our President (and I use that term loosely) would even consider abolishing the Environmental Protection Agency. It doesn't surprise me, though. Nothing Trump does surprises me...not really.
His corporations have probably been fined on numerous occasions by them, so now he feels he's in a position of power and can get even. He's like a little child whose had his favorite teddy bear taken from him.
Poor Donny...
Great script, very easy to follow.
Funny too, but also sad, in a very real sort of way.
Nicely done!
~Deano :)
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Hah!
So, our kindly Neighbors up North finally decided to build a wall to keep us Yanks from coming across their borders, 'ey, Michael?
Well, ya can't really blame 'em none now, can ya?
Madrenatura...Mother Nature?
Very clever, heh-heh.
It's unthinkable to me that our President (and I use that term loosely) would even consider abolishing the Environmental Protection Agency. It doesn't surprise me, though. Nothing Trump does surprises me...not really.
His corporations have probably been fined on numerous occasions by them, so now he feels he's in a position of power and can get even. He's like a little child whose had his favorite teddy bear taken from him.
Poor Donny...
Great script, very easy to follow.
Funny too, but also sad, in a very real sort of way.
Nicely done!
~Deano :)
Comment Written 01-May-2017
Comment from seaglass
Trump could be no more stupid if her tried. Glad you addressed it. Everyday since the election of the orange idiot, I've felt anxiety. Thankfully dedicated progressive citizens are willing to speak up and protest.
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Trump could be no more stupid if her tried. Glad you addressed it. Everyday since the election of the orange idiot, I've felt anxiety. Thankfully dedicated progressive citizens are willing to speak up and protest.
Comment Written 01-May-2017
Comment from country ranch writer
The Epa is right there Johnny on the spot to get their mitts on money but they still haven't made any head way in clearing our air just adding to the problems along with Trump wanting to ruin our forest we so love and enjoy
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The Epa is right there Johnny on the spot to get their mitts on money but they still haven't made any head way in clearing our air just adding to the problems along with Trump wanting to ruin our forest we so love and enjoy
Comment Written 01-May-2017