5/7/5(wordless days or nights)
Writer's Block 5/7/516 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This tells about poetic block, wordless state brings in disaster and poets find drought state when in addition muse lurks in shadows; poet's poverty of thoughts become evident.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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This tells about poetic block, wordless state brings in disaster and poets find drought state when in addition muse lurks in shadows; poet's poverty of thoughts become evident.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Good syllable count, the presentation is attractive, the overall composition is clear and to the point. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Hello, my friend,
Good syllable count, the presentation is attractive, the overall composition is clear and to the point. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reading & critique zanya
Comment from Dean Kuch
I think anyone who writes prolifically and constantly feels this way from time to time.
You just have those days where your muse seems silent.
I never have that problem, although there are times I wish I did.
My muse awakens me at 3:00am asking, "So. Are you gonna write somethin' or not?!?"
He doesn't shut up until I do.
Good syllable count and your 5/7/5 is well presented.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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I think anyone who writes prolifically and constantly feels this way from time to time.
You just have those days where your muse seems silent.
I never have that problem, although there are times I wish I did.
My muse awakens me at 3:00am asking, "So. Are you gonna write somethin' or not?!?"
He doesn't shut up until I do.
Good syllable count and your 5/7/5 is well presented.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the critique and the interesting observations zanya
Comment from Irish Rain
An awesome entry in this contest. Your 5-7-5 describes writers block perfectly. You know the words are there, but they hide themselves in your minds shadows. Wonderful! Blessings...
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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An awesome entry in this contest. Your 5-7-5 describes writers block perfectly. You know the words are there, but they hide themselves in your minds shadows. Wonderful! Blessings...
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Delighted with this review zanya
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, there are definitely seasons of "poetic drought!" But if the muse is "lurking," hopefully, she will comply and enter into the light and enlighten!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Yes, there are definitely seasons of "poetic drought!" But if the muse is "lurking," hopefully, she will comply and enter into the light and enlighten!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Great review zanya
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about that big fear to encounter wordless days or nights, where there is no inspiration coming from no-where, the Muse seems to be on vacation.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about that big fear to encounter wordless days or nights, where there is no inspiration coming from no-where, the Muse seems to be on vacation.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Yes indeed the Muse can take a surprise vacation !! Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I totally get it. I like the phrase 'wordless days or nights'. I can soooo relate. At least lately. Unfortunately. --sigh-- This is a great contender for the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I totally get it. I like the phrase 'wordless days or nights'. I can soooo relate. At least lately. Unfortunately. --sigh-- This is a great contender for the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes we all have times like these at the moment I know I am I enjoyed good luck in the contest my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Yes we all have times like these at the moment I know I am I enjoyed good luck in the contest my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem on a "Writer's Block". You kept to the correct number of lines and syllables. No wonder you have Writers Block. Your typewriter is not keeping up with the times.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem on a "Writer's Block". You kept to the correct number of lines and syllables. No wonder you have Writers Block. Your typewriter is not keeping up with the times.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from l.raven
I know what it is to have writers block...and it drives you nuts...
some times you just have to take a break...and come back fresh...very well written...and I love your picture
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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I know what it is to have writers block...and it drives you nuts...
some times you just have to take a break...and come back fresh...very well written...and I love your picture
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
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you RE SO VERY WELCOME...XXOO LOVE