Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Trump had fun at Christie's [expanse] (expense)

With Trump, every day is a new fiasco. How much stupidity can one man have? An immense amount, obviously. hahaha

Good job

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017

Somehow, Gypsy, I get the impression that you admire Trump's unmatchable assortment of shortcomings.
Thanks for catching my Christie dig.
Don

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

'He Thought He'd Gotten Away With It'- the title grabs the reader's attention right away.
This poem sums up the entire meaning in just SIX words.
The image is hilarious.- It fits the poem perfectly.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2017

Comment from cholb22

Good

A hot subject you have chosen, anything on Trump seems very popular, and the picture speaks volumes!
I think the last word should be expense though ... or have I missed something... being in the UK we don't hear it all!! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem, Cholb22. You did, indeed, miss something, probably attributable to your unfamiliarity with US political figures. "Fun at Christies expanse" is a double entendre. Christie, formerly a presidential wannabe, is known for his substantial girth.

I hope that might induce you to upgrade your four-star rating.

Don (aka Ogden)