Poems
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Comment from nomi338
My life was very strongly affected by my mother and my two sisters early on. Later in life I have been very strongly affected by my wife, my two daughters and my grand daughter. So I very much agree with your statement.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
My life was very strongly affected by my mother and my two sisters early on. Later in life I have been very strongly affected by my wife, my two daughters and my grand daughter. So I very much agree with your statement.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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Here's to the ladies.
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very good 5-7-5 poem you have penned about the four ladies in stone. You used very good imagery with the art work and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
Bill, This is a very good 5-7-5 poem you have penned about the four ladies in stone. You used very good imagery with the art work and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
'Works' is a lovely 5-7-5 poem.
Each line is a perfect fit.- Just the right amount of syllables.
The artwork is outstanding.- It's beautiful.
Thank you for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
'Works' is a lovely 5-7-5 poem.
Each line is a perfect fit.- Just the right amount of syllables.
The artwork is outstanding.- It's beautiful.
Thank you for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 07-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Thanks, Nicole.
Comment from mbroyles2
You presented this poem well and chose an excellent picture.
Great example of four women who must have been close during life, now closer in death.
Excellent writing!
Michael
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
You presented this poem well and chose an excellent picture.
Great example of four women who must have been close during life, now closer in death.
Excellent writing!
Michael
Comment Written 07-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Thank you, Michael.