Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Take Me Away"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
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Comment from Winslow
Dear Aiona,
Would be romantic to elope if he arrived in a limo to whisk you away. Did he? It looks like sunny Florida in the photo.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Dear Aiona,
Would be romantic to elope if he arrived in a limo to whisk you away. Did he? It looks like sunny Florida in the photo.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 25-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Winslow. He did! :)
Comment from Halfree
It could be the poetic form or it might be that I am a klutz and not up on all the forms. So I just have to wing it. I liked the last six lines, do not know exactly why.
I suspect I am too old to grasp all the poetic forms...still like the old masters and Miss Emily.
But do keep at it and I will read and struggle about to master reading and understanding the poems...regardless of form.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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It could be the poetic form or it might be that I am a klutz and not up on all the forms. So I just have to wing it. I liked the last six lines, do not know exactly why.
I suspect I am too old to grasp all the poetic forms...still like the old masters and Miss Emily.
But do keep at it and I will read and struggle about to master reading and understanding the poems...regardless of form.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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Yeah, I don't understand all these poetry forms either. I honestly don't see the point of not having a regular meter. BUT, I thought I'd give it a go. If you notice, I can't help but rhyme it anyway. It just doesn't make sense to make a poem not rhyme. Might as well just then be writing plain ol' prose. That's how I feel anyway. Maybe I'll understand it one day.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a delightful poem in an articulate and winning presentation. I so admire the writers on this site for their capabilities - especially their talented compliance with the diverse prompts rendered here...
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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In my opinion, a delightful poem in an articulate and winning presentation. I so admire the writers on this site for their capabilities - especially their talented compliance with the diverse prompts rendered here...
Comment Written 24-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Evesayshi. I love to try to write based on these prompts. It's like of like a word game. I love these kinds of puzzles.
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You are so welcome, Aiona - how fun and challenging - I wish I had more time to explore writing more of them. Happy writing...
Comment from marybell1
What a beautiful way to elope. Especially in a limo. All your syllables and lines were correct. And a lovely accompanying photo.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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What a beautiful way to elope. Especially in a limo. All your syllables and lines were correct. And a lovely accompanying photo.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Marybell1.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Cute and perfect etheree.
Does remind me of the Las Vegas weddings and the quick I Do's to make it complete. A different look at it. lol
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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Cute and perfect etheree.
Does remind me of the Las Vegas weddings and the quick I Do's to make it complete. A different look at it. lol
Comment Written 23-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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LOL! I wrote it based on my own wedding. And yes it was in Las Vegas. I didn't mention Las Vegas, so I find it funny that it reminds you of Las Vegas too.