crisp russet red leaves
Ode to Autumn26 total reviews
Comment from marybell1
I loved your 5-7-5 poem which you adhered to the rules. I loved your choice of photo. I had forgotten about potpourri. It keeps autumn with us a little longer.
Best of luck
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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I loved your 5-7-5 poem which you adhered to the rules. I loved your choice of photo. I had forgotten about potpourri. It keeps autumn with us a little longer.
Best of luck
Marybell1.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Thanks for reading and a great review zanya
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork.
-Format is good.
-Very good, colorful imagery, Zanya.
-You describe the sights and aromas,
all mixing together in "Autumn's potpourri."
-Nicely done and good luck.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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-Very nice artwork.
-Format is good.
-Very good, colorful imagery, Zanya.
-You describe the sights and aromas,
all mixing together in "Autumn's potpourri."
-Nicely done and good luck.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Thanks for a great review zanya
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You are welcome.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine ode to Autumn
with excellent imagery in the leaves and orchard aroma
Very good descriptive writing
and a fine reflective third line
Excellent art work to match the poem
Very nicely done
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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This is a fine ode to Autumn
with excellent imagery in the leaves and orchard aroma
Very good descriptive writing
and a fine reflective third line
Excellent art work to match the poem
Very nicely done
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Most encouraging review zanya
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Really enjoyed this 5-7-5 about Autumn. You have painted such a lovely picture of falls colours and smells and the last line....Autumns potpourri is just wonderful.
Have a lovely evening
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Really enjoyed this 5-7-5 about Autumn. You have painted such a lovely picture of falls colours and smells and the last line....Autumns potpourri is just wonderful.
Have a lovely evening
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Great review zanya
Comment from winnona
A very well-written contest entry. The words flowed and combined well creating an image of Autumn this was a creative approach using smell with the color. I think you have completed the challenge very well.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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A very well-written contest entry. The words flowed and combined well creating an image of Autumn this was a creative approach using smell with the color. I think you have completed the challenge very well.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thanks for reading and the critique zanya
Comment from MelB
Very nice imagery and description. Excellent syllable count. The artwork compliments the poem well. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Very nice imagery and description. Excellent syllable count. The artwork compliments the poem well. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thanks for this accolade zanya
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Zanya, this is a great Ode to Autumn. I love how
two senses - sight and smell - are interlinked.
Fantastic end line to conclude with a vibrant and
beautiful picture. Excellent work. ~DD
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Zanya, this is a great Ode to Autumn. I love how
two senses - sight and smell - are interlinked.
Fantastic end line to conclude with a vibrant and
beautiful picture. Excellent work. ~DD
Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Great review -zanya
Comment from Mustang Patty
Good luck in the contest!
Your short, but sweet, poem reminds us of the beauty of autumn. I especially loved the last line. It is pleasant to think of the fallen leaves as potpourri.
You've managed to put a great deal of alliteration into so few words. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Good luck in the contest!
Your short, but sweet, poem reminds us of the beauty of autumn. I especially loved the last line. It is pleasant to think of the fallen leaves as potpourri.
You've managed to put a great deal of alliteration into so few words. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Great review zanya
Comment from rjuselius
"crisp russet red leaves
swirl mid orchards aroma
Autumn's potpourri"
this is a brilliant piece of poetry dear anonymous! i love the satori and the second line is close to genius. bravo!
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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"crisp russet red leaves
swirl mid orchards aroma
Autumn's potpourri"
this is a brilliant piece of poetry dear anonymous! i love the satori and the second line is close to genius. bravo!
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thanks for this accolade - encouraging words zanya
Comment from sue133
A great composition and you have painted a vivid picture in so few words. All my senses were alive and I could hear the 'crisp russet red leaves' and smell the 'potpourri'. Very nicely done. Susan
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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A great composition and you have painted a vivid picture in so few words. All my senses were alive and I could hear the 'crisp russet red leaves' and smell the 'potpourri'. Very nicely done. Susan
Comment Written 20-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Wow - delighted with this review zanya