Trump lasted a day.
A 5-7-5 poem11 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest criteria with a correct theme and line / syllable count. I have to say I don't quite see how this really addresses his first few days in office though - all the innuendo related to "womanizing" was prior to his taking office. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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This meets the contest criteria with a correct theme and line / syllable count. I have to say I don't quite see how this really addresses his first few days in office though - all the innuendo related to "womanizing" was prior to his taking office. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your poem made me laugh and he certainly is patronising to women and needs some lessons in common decency, short poem with powerful words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Your poem made me laugh and he certainly is patronising to women and needs some lessons in common decency, short poem with powerful words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi maybe this is the way to express our dismay at having a President like him.but sorry to say that half the women voted for him and others.
It is sad .realisation comes after the blow.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Hi maybe this is the way to express our dismay at having a President like him.but sorry to say that half the women voted for him and others.
It is sad .realisation comes after the blow.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed weekend.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
You did an awesome job with your 5/7/5 trump poem. I think you will do well in the contest. I hate that asshole and you are right, he is a womanizer.
--correct syllable count
--the theme is trump
--the presentation is great.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Hello, my friend,
You did an awesome job with your 5/7/5 trump poem. I think you will do well in the contest. I hate that asshole and you are right, he is a womanizer.
--correct syllable count
--the theme is trump
--the presentation is great.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a great weekend.
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you are welcome, my friend :)
big fat buddha hugs and blessings
gypsy sensei <3
Comment from Cass Carlton
Yeah ,he's not much chop is he? In Australia we stood open mouthed at the furore as
it became clearer and clearer that the impossible had happened. What a difference between him and Mr. Obama. What dignity and grace Mr.and Mrs. Obama showed as they left. What petulant rantings and dummy spits from dopey Donald. Ah well, God Bless America and may God help us all. Cheers Cass
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Yeah ,he's not much chop is he? In Australia we stood open mouthed at the furore as
it became clearer and clearer that the impossible had happened. What a difference between him and Mr. Obama. What dignity and grace Mr.and Mrs. Obama showed as they left. What petulant rantings and dummy spits from dopey Donald. Ah well, God Bless America and may God help us all. Cheers Cass
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a great weekend. I completely agree.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yeah, well... It's very difficult to get anyone to believe anything negative about this ...man... and I use the term "man" quite loosely.
No real man talks about sleeping with another man's wife, and especially not when he himself is married.
But I guess it's okay with the moral majority and the Christian community, although had Obama done such things they would have called for his head on a cotton-lined silver platter.
I just don't get this jerk-offs appeal.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Yeah, well... It's very difficult to get anyone to believe anything negative about this ...man... and I use the term "man" quite loosely.
No real man talks about sleeping with another man's wife, and especially not when he himself is married.
But I guess it's okay with the moral majority and the Christian community, although had Obama done such things they would have called for his head on a cotton-lined silver platter.
I just don't get this jerk-offs appeal.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a great weekend. You are absolutely right.
Comment from Rhonni
I've noticed that this isn't a 5-7-5 haiku, your last line is also 7 syllables. If you have time to fix, you should consider doing so.
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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I've noticed that this isn't a 5-7-5 haiku, your last line is also 7 syllables. If you have time to fix, you should consider doing so.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a great weekend. Thanks for the tip.
Comment from Bobbi22
Although it has been more than a day, but still hoping not too many more to follow. You might want to check the syllable count on your last line. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Although it has been more than a day, but still hoping not too many more to follow. You might want to check the syllable count on your last line. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a great weekend Thanks for the tip;.
Comment from judester
Great entry, womanizer has a z. If it wasn't so serious it would be funny.He is like watching a semi skidding on black ice. Taking the photo of the woman's march on the mall and saying it was the inaugeration crowd (it was dated) is so disturbing and tells alot of his character. I am Canadian, but I sympathize. Cheers, j
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Great entry, womanizer has a z. If it wasn't so serious it would be funny.He is like watching a semi skidding on black ice. Taking the photo of the woman's march on the mall and saying it was the inaugeration crowd (it was dated) is so disturbing and tells alot of his character. I am Canadian, but I sympathize. Cheers, j
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a great weekend
Comment from laffad
Hahaha, I should not be laughing but I actually find humor in this. Great words, great picture, even if it is of a pig. Thanks for writing this, you made my morning. Thou art fabulous.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Hahaha, I should not be laughing but I actually find humor in this. Great words, great picture, even if it is of a pig. Thanks for writing this, you made my morning. Thou art fabulous.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a great weekend
