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Trump's First Days

5-7-5 entry

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Comment from moonsunrise
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Your poem is "spot on"! Only time will tell the ramifications of what he is trying to do. Let's hope for the positive vs. the negative. I hope he takes the country in the right direction but have my fears that this will not occur. I hope I am wrong and want him to do what is right for our country otherwise we are doomed.
Very well written in so few words.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
    Thanks. Glad you liked it. Yes - only time will tell. That was only the first few days. I'm sure we'll get constant report cards on how he's doing. He's been quick in implementing his agenda. I think America is in for many positive changes.

    Appreciate your thoughts ... ;) starkat
reply by moonsunrise on 21-Feb-2017
    Agree.
Comment from Luna
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Reactions most certainly do vary. Don't get me started on mine! You wrote this well, Art. I'm a fan of yours, but for some reason I'm not getting notified when you post new work -- I'll have to send a message to Tom to see if he can fix that.

I'm going to send you a PM

Best,
jeni

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2017

Comment from Benny Beeharry
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Hi yes reactions vary. Maybe it is too early to praise or condemn.
He is the President and he has a great knack to destroy, may be to build also.
Danny Jock

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
    Thanks, Danny Jock -
    Yes- it is way too early for judgement. It's only been a few days at work and he has 4 years of decision making. It will be interesting to see how it all pans out. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. Like a bull-dozer he get rid of all the things that makes the government rotten to the core and start building new and better rekations. He has a job to do, and he does it well.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
    Thanks. He's only been at it for a few days and he has 4 years of decision making ahead of him. He's do a great job, so far. It will be interesting to see how it all pans out. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from Irish Rain
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Only time will tell....so true. He is the first president I've ever seen though, that steps right up, and actually DOES what he promised. God bless America...and blessings to you!!!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
    Thanks! He's only been at it for a few days, and has 4 years of decision making ahead of him. He's off to a fast start and knows what he wants to do. I think he's doing a great job, so far. It will be interesting to see how it all pans out. Cheers ... ;o)
reply by Irish Rain on 28-Jan-2017
    I will back him 100%...if he needs to tax Mexico 20%, and it reflects on the cost of our produce...quit buying it....Mexico will eventually pay for that wall...one thing I know...he's NOT going to stick it to the American people the way Obama did!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Few words with great meaning, the markets are in chaos at the moment and exchange rates affect my personal life and since Brexit I am losing around £2,000 per year! So Trump has the finger on the button and hope he makes some good decisions and trade deals with Britain! Great words! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, my friend,

You did a good job with the syllable count and the presentation is easy to read and if it wasn't for trump's face, it would be even attractive. Well written.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

Comment from Heidi M
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Accurate account of what is happening for the time being. Your last line says it all: America waits. We are all wondering what the outcome will be.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2017

Comment from jusylee72
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The man both scares and intrigues me. He has made my investments grow. I am happy that you took the time to put it into words. Thank you for the writing . Judy

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2017

Comment from JanPerry
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You have your eye on him. We appreciate it. Lovely words and profound statements as in Australia, we don't give a damn. I just hope the ramifications don't cause stress in other sectors.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2017