Geoffrey's Musings.
Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "Another Loss."A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.
19 total reviews
Comment from Caressa_08
Oh, it seems she lived a long life, though So Sorry for your loss and your message is a good one that it is inevitable.....And to get your heart right with God is the way to go.
Caressa_08
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Oh, it seems she lived a long life, though So Sorry for your loss and your message is a good one that it is inevitable.....And to get your heart right with God is the way to go.
Caressa_08
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thanks, mate. Appreciate the kind review sorry no rewards on this one. Very soon have another chapter of my biography coming up for another review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem is sad, but true. We do not know when our time will be up.
Good job & best wishes as your journey continues.
Sorry for your loss. Jan
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Your poem is sad, but true. We do not know when our time will be up.
Good job & best wishes as your journey continues.
Sorry for your loss. Jan
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Thanks Jan, appreciate your lovely review. I mention Dear Aunty Lorna more in my Autobiography which is up for some more reviewing seeing I edited a lot of it. Been battling with Grammarly. Even when you set it up for British English it still stuffs up on some words...Jackie Franklin warned me about Grammarly messing up on Comma's too. Thanks again.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hey Geoff(((((((((((... sorry to hear of your and your family's loss mate... doesn't really matter about if it's a good innings or not... the thing of that last of the last in a family line puts a real feeling of finalization. I hear your words... and if it takes a loss to initiate the time to 'get things in order' with one's heart than so be it.
To say thanks for sharing this poem and your loss doesn't quite sound right... but I'm glad your friends and fans can at least share your loss in some way... so thanks for that!
RIP Aunty Lorna!
With our thoughts we create,
the mindset to be the best version of ourselves.
James.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Hey Geoff(((((((((((... sorry to hear of your and your family's loss mate... doesn't really matter about if it's a good innings or not... the thing of that last of the last in a family line puts a real feeling of finalization. I hear your words... and if it takes a loss to initiate the time to 'get things in order' with one's heart than so be it.
To say thanks for sharing this poem and your loss doesn't quite sound right... but I'm glad your friends and fans can at least share your loss in some way... so thanks for that!
RIP Aunty Lorna!
With our thoughts we create,
the mindset to be the best version of ourselves.
James.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thanks mate. I have a feeling you just missed out on a reward for your review. But much appreciated anyway. I am currently , once again working on another review of my Autobiography. I went through it with Grammarly to then be informed that Grammarly was OFF on Comma's so now going through again and making up my own mind about the Comma's, hehe, Cheers.
Comment from RonCraig
Hey Geoff,
So sorry when I got this news on facebook my friend.
In reading this I stumbled on this line, seems something is missing,
"We will away....so" Yours, suggestions below?
"We too will pass...so" OR
"We will leave...so" OR
"We will go away...so"
I hope all is well with you and Louise, I've let this membership slide so I can follow your posts but can't post my work now. It just got frustrating spending $10 a chapter and stayed buried on page 3 for 3-4 reviews.
Ron
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Hey Geoff,
So sorry when I got this news on facebook my friend.
In reading this I stumbled on this line, seems something is missing,
"We will away....so" Yours, suggestions below?
"We too will pass...so" OR
"We will leave...so" OR
"We will go away...so"
I hope all is well with you and Louise, I've let this membership slide so I can follow your posts but can't post my work now. It just got frustrating spending $10 a chapter and stayed buried on page 3 for 3-4 reviews.
Ron
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Hi Bro can send you a free link to my stuff if you want. I may be gone pretty soon after July myself. So much WRONG with this place. I should write this privately as all reviews and comments are public. A couple of yanks and rebels have suggested as you have but most understand where I am coming from with my expression ok! FS will cost me too much to keep it going past July unless the Green back has a "Cerebral haemmorhoid"(remember that one...MINE!) Like it did a while ago and our dollar was better than youers for a very short time. I guess greenback will recover now Trump is at the helm, huh! Lord Bless.
Comment from The Cowboy Poet
The loss of a loved one is a tragic occurrence. You have expressed well the depth of sorrow you feel. Your statement that we do not know when our time will come is totally accurate. Enjoy them while they're here. Cowboy
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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The loss of a loved one is a tragic occurrence. You have expressed well the depth of sorrow you feel. Your statement that we do not know when our time will come is totally accurate. Enjoy them while they're here. Cowboy
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Thanks, friend. have to look for your stuff think I might have reviewed you a time or two, Cheers.
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You're welcome. Cowboy
Comment from Ben Colder
My blessings and comfort to you. Brother, our Lord tells us that our time is always. He will keep you strong through your storm. Until then. my friend.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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My blessings and comfort to you. Brother, our Lord tells us that our time is always. He will keep you strong through your storm. Until then. my friend.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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AMEn Bro not sure Aunty was the Lord's but praying she called out to Him in time!
Comment from seaglass
Do sorry for your loss. My half brother also passed away recently. He had a long life but we never really want to go. We just accept that we must. I have your book and will be sending it after payday.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Do sorry for your loss. My half brother also passed away recently. He had a long life but we never really want to go. We just accept that we must. I have your book and will be sending it after payday.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Oh goody. Looking forward to it. Thanks for the lovely review.
Comment from Irish Rain
I am so sorry for your loss. 95...what a blessing, your family must have long lives. Still, a loss is still sad, no matter the years...this is lovely, and your advice...'get your heart right with God'...wonderful. Blessings
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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I am so sorry for your loss. 95...what a blessing, your family must have long lives. Still, a loss is still sad, no matter the years...this is lovely, and your advice...'get your heart right with God'...wonderful. Blessings
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thanks, forget if bro or Sis,sadly pretty sure Aunty not saved.
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I believe she's still with God...
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Well I hope you are right. But we are not all going to Heaven, sorry. I know certain ones claim we all are but sadly not true. There is a very real Hell and it is not on earth.
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but we can never truly know what's in another persons heart, even at the last minute...hopefully Christ was in your Aunts heart
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I agree and maybe she called out to the Lord at the last minute, Have you seen my poem where I have a real go at the Seven Sacraments of Rome? None of Rome's hokey pokey can save anyone.
Comment from GWinterwin
Such a sad story in this poem my friend, so sorry to hear about your loss. Good job of telling your story in a very few amount of words. I pray Gods' blessings on you, and family. Good words on telling of how we all need to always be ready to meet the master.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Such a sad story in this poem my friend, so sorry to hear about your loss. Good job of telling your story in a very few amount of words. I pray Gods' blessings on you, and family. Good words on telling of how we all need to always be ready to meet the master.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Hey Bro thanks, was the '4' a mistake? Have done it myself many times😌
Comment from royowen
My dear brother passed away last year after a short illness, a couple of very close friends. The death of dear ones and friends, is a constant as one ages Geoff, well done mate, nicely written work, may God bring comfort, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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My dear brother passed away last year after a short illness, a couple of very close friends. The death of dear ones and friends, is a constant as one ages Geoff, well done mate, nicely written work, may God bring comfort, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thanks, Bro Roy, appreciate you coming by, and your lovely comments. I did spend a lot of time with Aunty Lorna when I was quite young.
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They are a great source of wisdom