Timothy and Marylyne in Love's Embra
Patience has its limits. (Especially for the elderly.)2 total reviews
Comment from Onixxiya
Hahaha, oh this tickled me - didn't even realise it was a contest entry until the end - testament to how well you disguised the very prescriptive form.
"Have you been tippling the rum?" is by far my favourite line, a for the expression which I have not heard in some time, and b for that to be the first conclusion Marylyene's lover may come to.
Utter hilarity, with a twinge of Dali at the end - am I right, did time end? And the picture, is that Dali?
Wonderful read, thanks for sharing it and best of luck to you in the contest.
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Hahaha, oh this tickled me - didn't even realise it was a contest entry until the end - testament to how well you disguised the very prescriptive form.
"Have you been tippling the rum?" is by far my favourite line, a for the expression which I have not heard in some time, and b for that to be the first conclusion Marylyene's lover may come to.
Utter hilarity, with a twinge of Dali at the end - am I right, did time end? And the picture, is that Dali?
Wonderful read, thanks for sharing it and best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute Repetition poem you have penned. You have used very cute and funny wording. You used very good descriptive wording too. I enjoyed very much. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
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This is a very cute Repetition poem you have penned. You have used very cute and funny wording. You used very good descriptive wording too. I enjoyed very much. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017