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Unbreakable Bond

Love is unpredictable.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This 3-5-3 senryu on love, Unbreakable Bond, places the reader in the place of the captured heart, rendered weak and possibly unable to think clearly or want to. Nice.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
    Thank you for your insightful review!
Comment from angel123
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I enjoyed reading your well-written poem. It's witty and cute and it flows well with love and nice alliteration of words love, like and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts. Happy Holidays.

angel123

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2016

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
    Thank you very much!
Comment from Leineco
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:-)

Stealing your heart
with stealth and a smile
love comes asneakin'
into your heart
Next thing you know
you can't be apart -
Volunteer hostage!


Nicely done :-)

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2016

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
    You pretty much summed it up! Better than I did. Thank you!
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Excellent
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Yes this is well written and beautifully presented you have fulfilled the challenge of the short form well proving that so much can be said using this form good luck regards Jill

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
    Thank you very much!