Comment from Johnnord

Exceptional

Concise yet deep
Simple yet insightful
Calm but troubling

You've got quite a muse!
well done -happy new year!
John

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016

Thank you very much.

Happy new year to you too.

Comment from winnona

Excellent

Beautifully written coontest entrry. Your words flowed well combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your artwork and background color completed the piece well.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016

Thank you very much.

Comment from Franklin Price

Excellent

What a great reflection on nature, as a whole, in only a 5-7-5. As good or better than that, it rhymes and very nicely. I struggled with myself to vote for it, but I was also entered, was selfish, and determined I needed at least one vote. You were a super close second, sorry.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016

Thank you very much.

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Poet,

Could you tone down the rhyme in this 5-7-5 nature entry? lol
It is true what you say about the seeds from the trees. You
have a wonderful satori-like ending, beautiful presentation.

Very best wishes in the contest...I think I shall bow out
gracefully...like those swans.

Linda

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016

Thank you very much.

reply by AnnaLinda on 22-Dec-2016

Lancellot, you are welcome.
I'm no longer muted?? ;)

reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016

I didn't like the forums thing, but you changed it. So I moved on too.

reply by AnnaLinda on 22-Dec-2016

Okay...good to hear.

Comment from WalkerMan

Excellent

I like this aptly and colorfully illustrated monorhyming 5-7-5, which is nicely presented with green italic text on black background. Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016

Thank you very much.

reply by WalkerMan on 22-Dec-2016

You are welcome. -- Mike