Sometimes Roses, Sometimes Thorns
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "On Building Bars to Shield"A collection of sonnets
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Comment from lyenochka
Impressive sonnet style and form. The internal rhymes and the alliteration make this poem sing. The only thing I wonder about is the title; whether the bars are really being built or on the verge of disintegration. Striking mixed metaphor in the "shriek of rusty metal."
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Impressive sonnet style and form. The internal rhymes and the alliteration make this poem sing. The only thing I wonder about is the title; whether the bars are really being built or on the verge of disintegration. Striking mixed metaphor in the "shriek of rusty metal."
Comment Written 02-Nov-2016
Comment from William Ross
excellent on the English sonnet of not maybe feeling worthy of her love. very well done Michael. thanks for the share and have a wonderful day.
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excellent on the English sonnet of not maybe feeling worthy of her love. very well done Michael. thanks for the share and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2016