Comment from Dreamdancer

Excellent

Hi Miss J,
an inspiration you are to all my friend. Your words flow with a life of their own creating art that captures the readers heart. Thanks for sharing my friend... Buddy

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2005

Comment from fly4hi

Excellent

Jewell;
A write after my own heart. Unconditional love
created the earth. It will also be what saves it,
plus the inhabitants upon her. Great write, wonderfully
worded. Love is our legacy.
I am listening to music on my headphones. Clay Aiken's
Christmas cd. I absolutely love the new Christmas song
"Mary do you know? Brings tears to my eyes and joy
to my heart. Awesome. God Bless you dear heart and I
hope and pray for your happiest holiday season ever. :} jonn

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2005

Comment from spazmasterr

Excellent

How many times can I say it? Nice. I like the short to the point stuff that isn't beating the reader over the head with thoughts...


I don't know how many people can give this kind of love, but good for you!

or...whatever character is doing such a thing.

happy holidays

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2005

Comment from Louanne

Excellent

Another fine write, my dear, to
be read slowly, and appreciated
for its spirit and full intent. True love
is unconditional. Any other similar
something must be called something
other than love.

Good job!

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2005

Comment from Bloomer Burbs

Excellent

Hi Jewell

Firstly who is that beautiful woman in the the washing machine and how did she get in there in the first place? LOL

Beautiful sentiments/thoughts you have expressed so well in your poem. I guess too many people always want something from you without giving back. Often at the expense of the other persons self esteem or sensitivity.

Giving to other should/is a far greater gift. Kind of a Karma thing

Choices
Unconditional
A matter of the soul
Strengthening the spirit

Mucho blessing my friend

Peter

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2005

Comment from Lisloh

Excellent

Oh yeah, and you know of places many don't.
You brought this back from your last visit there...:0)

So much said in so few words, God I wish I could do that....
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh

Excellent presentation.

Choices
Unconditional
A matter of the soul
Strengthening the spirit

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2005

Comment from Moonchild28

Excellent

Great poem! Unconditional love is divine as it is a selfless love and given freely from our hearts and souls. Love shouldn't be given if it's expected to be returned as you might be disappointed in the outcome.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2005

Comment from Words_Thru_Blue_Eyes

Excellent

I would soooo give this six stars if I could. Each and every word describes me. I am a very unconditional lover and sometimes that can be a bad thing and not realize the bad things the person is doing to you. but, i am a very loving soul and have a good heart. As you may already know?! The wrods are outstanding and the flow is amazing. I am trying to follow my expectations but i dont have a lot, just someone who cares and loves me for who i am! thats not to much to ask..is it??! Your peoem is amazing, sounds like something i would write.LOLZ! well... here's another longgggg review..hope u dont mind?! :)

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2005

Comment from Premiere Vision

Excellent

Hi Jewell
That was good, like I said, nary a moment that I spend, poetry spends itself in my life.
I will write you one now, just like that based on what I saw, and appreciated.

Love, the very, word, wordless, speechless,
'O woman, I need you, when they are going to,
send me away, when i will refuse to go,
the very thoughts, of spending my nights,
lying near you, looking into your beautiful eyes,
for the love that I feel, the love that is there,
waiting to escape, reality, cheat the grim reaper,
find the words I do, and say, find me the pleasure,
that my lover gave me, and then, you can,
have my soul, have my body, have me in entirety,
but, until then, leave me in peace, fie be gone!
For I will find my own Tomb!!!!!!!

Impromptu..may need a few corrections.
Hey, perhaps, I will write a poem for you, your joy of life is truly boundless.........enjoy. I am Buddhist, we have a special way of life, although I am pretty crazy.......Ta
Prem

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2005

Comment from volunteer angel

Excellent

I see a spiritual message here in that God loves each and every one of us unconditionally. We can return that love or not, it's up to us. In doing so, we do develop character and love for Him and our fellow man. Good job. Love the picture too. Volunteer Angel

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2005