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Comment from nomi338
Okay. Now just what did I do with that wed killer? All I need, some plant trying to engage me in mind control. You are outta here!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
Okay. Now just what did I do with that wed killer? All I need, some plant trying to engage me in mind control. You are outta here!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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Thank you, nomi, for the fun review. Bill
Comment from dragonpoet
This sounds very negative. It sounds like the speaker ( which seems to be a plant) wants to kill all people. The title though seems like it is a flower in a garden to honor soldiers. Kind of confusing. But life is confusing.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
This sounds very negative. It sounds like the speaker ( which seems to be a plant) wants to kill all people. The title though seems like it is a flower in a garden to honor soldiers. Kind of confusing. But life is confusing.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 06-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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I used the title to be ironic. If you buy the bit, that plants can control a mind, then the rest should follow. Thank you for reviewing.
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That could work. Maybe these plants are weeds trying control humans so they can stay alive.
Only if we could find a plant that could stop all terrorist thoughts.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Didn't Mark Walburg star in a movie about this a few years ago. It seems that the plants reveled and killed everyone. Kinda of like Venus Flytraps on steroids.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
Didn't Mark Walburg star in a movie about this a few years ago. It seems that the plants reveled and killed everyone. Kinda of like Venus Flytraps on steroids.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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We have a plant at home that is killing me now. My wife waters and sings to it. They're probably in it together.