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Comment from nomi338
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Okay. Now just what did I do with that wed killer? All I need, some plant trying to engage me in mind control. You are outta here!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
    Thank you, nomi, for the fun review. Bill
Comment from dragonpoet
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This sounds very negative. It sounds like the speaker ( which seems to be a plant) wants to kill all people. The title though seems like it is a flower in a garden to honor soldiers. Kind of confusing. But life is confusing.

Keep writing

Joan

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
    I used the title to be ironic. If you buy the bit, that plants can control a mind, then the rest should follow. Thank you for reviewing.
reply by dragonpoet on 06-Sep-2016
    That could work. Maybe these plants are weeds trying control humans so they can stay alive.
    Only if we could find a plant that could stop all terrorist thoughts.

    Keep writing.

    dragonpoet
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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Didn't Mark Walburg star in a movie about this a few years ago. It seems that the plants reveled and killed everyone. Kinda of like Venus Flytraps on steroids.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
    We have a plant at home that is killing me now. My wife waters and sings to it. They're probably in it together.