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Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "The Diamond, Emerald, and Ruby"A delightful Childen Lesson Book.
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Hi sweetie! This is really a creative idea having all of the gems jockeying for favor - seems a parallel to the writing on here LOL. I rated you down because of all the SPAG throughout the piece. You have some very imaginative stuff and should start grammar checking so that other readers will be as intrigued to read as I am. God bless and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Hi sweetie! This is really a creative idea having all of the gems jockeying for favor - seems a parallel to the writing on here LOL. I rated you down because of all the SPAG throughout the piece. You have some very imaginative stuff and should start grammar checking so that other readers will be as intrigued to read as I am. God bless and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Not. Finhed yet,
RICKY1024
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Not. Finhed yet,
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Comment from beizanten
THis is confusing. You should describe the character, the character emotion, situation they are in and the setting bettle. I am sorry but this story is a jumble mess.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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THis is confusing. You should describe the character, the character emotion, situation they are in and the setting bettle. I am sorry but this story is a jumble mess.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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