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Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "A reason to smile"
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Comment from rjuselius
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this is a fine piece of poetry and it showcases well in a few words your faith dear s.m.! i am smiling here my friend.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
    Thank you for reviewing and comment,I am glad you are smiling.God Bless
Comment from misscookie
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Everyone should believe in Him forever more.
Amen to that!
Your words were few
Yet the meaning was huge.
You made my day, I truly thank you.
Cookie

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
    Thank you for reviewing, God Bless
Comment from mfowler
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'Smile if you believe'...what a brilliant line. It combines bumper
sticker bravado with declaration off religious faith. Placed neatly
between the Christian aphorism that 'Jesus died for me' and the
statement re needing to thank God daily, you not only give an
excellent of what belief in Jesus means to believers, but also
advertise, and collect data. LOL. A really excellent little poem.
A great statement of faith.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
    Thank you for reviewing and nice comment. Never thought of it as a bumper sticker.Maybe,God Bless
Comment from Belinda
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You remind me of those posts in the social media. Like' if you agree. But of course this is different. This is you, conveying the truth. Yes, I smile with you. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
    Thank you for reviewing, I think I'll make this a bumper sticker.I am glad you are smiling.Have a great day.
Comment from Liberty Justice
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Five stars. Very spiritual joyful poem brings great
inspiration to reader and photo emphasizes theme. Nice! Review mine also. liberty justice

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
    Thank you for reviewing and five stars,I do appreciate it .will review yours also, God Bless
Comment from heyjude
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S.M. , I love the sentiment in these few syllables. Spot
on with your syllable count. We definitely have something
to smile about if we believe Jesus died for our sins and
we should be grateful each and every day.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
    Thank you for taking the time to review and commenting,I appreciate it .Yes we as believers do have a reason to smile.Hope you have a bless day
Comment from Zue65
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I always enjoy reading poems about God and Jesus as you did in this 5-7-5. Although you mentioned smile in your poem, the message of your poem is a bit serious. For all Christians the issue of salvation is a serious matter. Anyway, thanks for sharing. God bless.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
    Thank you for reviewing and commenting,I appreciate it.I agree that the issue of salvation is a serious matter,I also believe as a Christian ,When I think about how much he loves me it reason enough to smile.Knowing what my future holds makes me smile.God Bless
Comment from Lisa Deverick
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I smiled. Not because of humor, but because of the sweet emotion you put into this. Your 5-7-5 is a good entry for the contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
    Thank you for reviewing ,I am glad Smiled,Hope you have a good day,God Bless
Comment from rbutner
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Well you should accomplish what the prompt suggests! You have packed a lot of meaning into your 5-7-5. Well done. The art work you selected is lovely as well.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 17-Jun-2016
    Thank you for reviewing I appreciate it.God Bless
Comment from kathleenspalding
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Very nice five seven five gets the message across using very few words. Excellent choice of artwork. Nice testimony. Thank you for writing and sharing, and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
    Thank for reviewing I do appreciate it.God Bless
reply by kathleenspalding on 14-Jun-2016
    You're welcome.