Comment from Liberty Justice

Exceptional

SIX STARS 6. Ricky this short flash fiction is lively and expresses your deal feelings so well. Such a sad ordeal but you have good memories. You should be in healing stages now. BE STRONG! HEAL! View mine also. liberty justice

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016

Hi there
Miss Justice for all!

Healing?
Well, the pain never leaves for such a loss but ypu learn to cope with a rope...
Ricky....

reply by Liberty Justice on 11-Jun-2016

Hi Ricky you've been quiet.
Where have you been? View
mine also if you may.DONT
WORRY BE HAPPY! liberty
justice

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Short, sweet, but very emotive. One can feel your pain! Losing a child is never anything a parent should have to go through. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016

Thanks my love...
Ever yours forever..
Ricky...

Comment from konni

Excellent

So sorry for your loss. So true that with grief we lose our ability to remember the good stuff. Our last memories are so hard that they take on precedence and linger, denying us the happier past.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind thoughts and reverence.
Ricky...

Comment from Beara Bella

Good

This is sad. I understand the pain that hurts and won't stop or stop to a degree. Writing wise the "So sad" should be something like "Sorrowful" instead to make this great in the writing at this one part. Overall great and I'm sorry for your loss.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016

Thanks ever so muuch..

reply by Beara Bella on 10-Jun-2016

You are welcome.