Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Missy. I no you say this is not autobiographical. However, tell Uncle Fez who it is that made you feel this way and I'll go and sort 'em out mate! lol. Very nicely written and presented. But sad.

Well done.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017

Hugs to you, my sweet friend.

Missy

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Missy, you get a few who will relate to this poem sweet girl...your words so very sad...felt from the heart my friend...one day at a time...sigh...very well expressed you...and very well written...picture says it all...love ya you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016

I precious, I think I owe you one other reply and I'll get to it if I do... Darn life messin with me :)
Thank you, hon for this lovely review xx.

Always,
Missy

reply by l.raven on 09-Jun-2016

Hi sweetie, don't worry about a reply...I know how you feel...sometimes life just won't let go...you are always so welcome...xxoo Linda love ya

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I think you have described lost love very well, how our mind goes round and round trying to figure things out, and, yet, we are still obsessed. And, I think most people have had it happen to them once or twice and can identify. Marilyn

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016

I agree with everything you've said, Marilyn. Thank you for leaving me this lovely review :)

Always,
Missy

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

So this isnt autobiographical but i bett it concerns something dredged up fro m the dim and distant past.

I think most of us have been there at some time or another and often it turns out to be a false alarm. But sometimes it isn't and that is sad.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016

Hi, Gynt. Thank you for the positive review :)
You're right about the past but this time the song here brought these words to life for me.

Always,
Missy

Comment from Kooky Clown

Excellent

I was so pleased to read this is not autobiographical as I am a big softee and I was almost in tears reading this poem it so beautiful but sad and I think it is great a really moving piece of prose well done.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016

Hi KC, thanks for the sweet review :)

Always,
Missy

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Oh, how well I know this feeling...sigh... and this is such beautiful free verse, but I am so late reviewing it a six won't help to promote it anymore. I'm so sorry because that's the rating this richly deserves. I just can't keep up anymore, even with announcements.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016

Hi sug!! Not to worry bout the rating, I trust your word xx
Can't keep up either!!

Always,
Missy

reply by Dawn Munro on 09-Jun-2016

Yay! Thank you, 'cause I wouldn't say it if I didn't believe it! :))

Comment from scongrove

Exceptional

Missy, this is absolutely breathtaking dear. :)
I have goose bumps all over my body after I read this. I'm so lost for words....
Girl, you got it! Just beautiful!!!!
Thanks for sharing this. I hope your day is brighter. God has truly gifted you honey.
Shana :)

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016

BIG OL SMOOCH!!!
Thank you, Shana for this awesome review!
Love Ya!!
Missy

reply by scongrove on 09-Jun-2016

You're very welcome & truly deserving. :)

Comment from Susanjohn

Excellent

Ouch!!! this one tugs at the very soul!!! Very nicely written, But how emotional. enjoyed reading this poem of yours....nice music too :-)

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017

Thank you so much, Susan. I have been gone for a long time and just back.

Missy

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

Beautifully constructed tale
of wistfully travelling down
a lonesome path all by one's
self that you have artistically
and wistfully sung in tones
of melancholy that seep through
in poetic majesty.
Well done

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017

Awww, Fastdigits, I have missed your lovely reviews. :)

Missy

Comment from Word Junkie

Excellent

Hello justafan,

I like this. It's melancholy, true, but we've all felt this way at one time or another. Great way of expressing loss and confusion.

That last line is perfect.

Well done, and write on!
Lana

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017

Thank you, Lana. Sorry for the huge delay in this reply. Life!!!

Missy