Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

I'm so glad that I'm back on line (long story!) and I'm able to catch up at last. As usual, you leave us hanging on to a cliff edge with our teeth, and I can't wait to read on. Great writing as always.

Hugs from France,

Alexis xxx

 Comment Written 12-May-2016

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reply by the author on 15-May-2016

Hi Alexis, thank you so much for this. You know how much it means to me. We speak soon. Hugs from Spain. Ulla xxx

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

I'm behind on reviews, but catching up! Another good continuation to your story, Ulla! How odd that your aunt would phone at that time, just when you wanted her to. I really like the way you tell the story as if I was sitting with you and listening to you.

Well done.

Av

 Comment Written 05-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Hi Av, I am in the same boat. I'm so behind. Yes, it was amazing that my aunt should phone just when I wanted her to. thanks again Av, and looking forward to more of your writing. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Oh, man, I wanted to know more than that. Hahaha ... This was a very interesting chapter. I want to know what happens with the lawyer. Are you rich? Mi amiga la rica que vive en Espana. LoL

Do you know this expression? LOL you probably do.

Great job! I enjoyed reading your chapter.

*Besitos y abrazas de tu amiga la gitana que vive en California*

 Comment Written 05-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Hola Gitana, no soy rica, pero soy la rica que vive en Espana. Si que lo entiendo. Thanks so much for this great review. I am very pleased. Besitos a ti tambien. Ulla:)))

Comment from F. Wehr3

Excellent

Another good continuation to your story. Can't wait to see what Ms. Faber does.

'It was well equipped with food and, while I tossed up a hearty salad, I stuck a loaf of bread in the oven to be heated up. ' You have two complete sentences with a dependent clause in the middle. The comma comes before the conjunction (For, and nor, but, or, yet, so).

Again, I sighed, and picked up the phone.' This is one sentence. No comma needed before and.

Take care,
Russell

 Comment Written 04-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Thanks so much, Russel, for this great review, and for your help. Only one thing I need to say is that I am confused. I get contradicting advise on those commas all the time. Really don't know what to do. All the best. Ulla:))

reply by F. Wehr3 on 05-May-2016

I just found the member who gave you conflicting advice. I will double check to make certain that I am giving you the best advice possible, and I will speak to that member personally.

Take care,
Russell

reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Thanks a lot for coming back on this Russell. I do appreciate it and would love to know the outcome. I really do want to learn and get it right. Best regards. Ulla:)

reply by F. Wehr3 on 05-May-2016

I will private message you when I find out. It was just one member? Or were there multiple people?

reply by the author on 05-May-2016

I think it was more than one. I'll have to back and look at all the reviews again. Looking forward to your message. Ulla:)

Comment from RPSaxena

Exceptional

Hello Ulla,
It's a nice piece of Biographical Non-Fiction working as a link between the last part and the coming one.
Lovely phraseology going straight from the head to heart.
Smooth, captivating and nonstop flow from the beginning to the end.
Interesting, and beautifully leading to the next part!

 Comment Written 04-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Aww, RPSaxena, what a lovely review and the extra star. I am so pleased with the praise. You've made my day. Thanks ever so much for the review. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Very interesting and Suspenceful story how woman almost cheated out of inheritance. This story has detailed conversations between various characters. She even has conversations with her male companion who has things cooled off between them. Check mine out also today. Good luck contests. liberty justice

 Comment Written 03-May-2016

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reply by the author on 04-May-2016

Thank you for the review. I am a bit confused this is not a contest. All best. Ulla

reply by Liberty Justice on 04-May-2016

Hi! Check mine out also.
Thanks!

Comment from Word Junkie

Exceptional

Hi Ulla,

This is darned close to perfect, definitely worth a six. I like the pace, and the description. Dialogue is charming, believable, and deepens characterization. A whole loaf of bread? Seriously?? Lol, just kidding! She was definitely hungry!

Great job and write on,
Lana

 Comment Written 02-May-2016

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reply by the author on 03-May-2016

Wow, Lana what can I say. I'm overjoyed. Thank you ever so much for the raving review and the six. I was starving, hehe. Didn't eat it all though. All the best, and thanks again. Ulla)))

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Ulla, I thought I'd missed some of your excellent biography, but then I remembered that you had been writing other things, this story continues to engage my interest every time you write my friend.

 Comment Written 02-May-2016

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reply by the author on 02-May-2016

Thanks so much, Eric. Your support means so much to me. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from amada

Excellent

This is a very well paced story. I wish you well in that inheritance, having one of our own these days, or I might say, three years and counting. Your writing is precise and honest. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 02-May-2016

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reply by the author on 04-May-2016

Thanks very much. All the best. Ulla:)

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

What a coincidence that Grethe called just when you were wishing you had her number! So, hopefully, the lawyers have cleaned up the mess and you will get your inheritance. :)

 Comment Written 02-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Thanks very much , Phyllis, yes it was a lovely coincidence that my aunt should phone at the very same minute I wished she would. All the best. Ulla:)))