Of Poets and Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "What of Me?"NaPoWriMo 2016 Challenge (30 Poems in April)
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
I like the setting on this like a stairway to?? You've done such a variety and have really grown with your April writes, and this one, as in Gwendoline's poem uses simple words but meaningful when put together. Good one Kim
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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I like the setting on this like a stairway to?? You've done such a variety and have really grown with your April writes, and this one, as in Gwendoline's poem uses simple words but meaningful when put together. Good one Kim
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Hi Valda,
I really enjoyed reading Gwendolyn's poem and kept coming back to it, so just had to try that style... I was thinking of it like the steps we take to preserve our friendships. Thanks for the great review, I appreciate the comments.
Kim
Comment from Leineco
I can definitely see the influence of G. Brooks' "We Real Cool"
here - but found your take on it a bit more cryptic.
While Brooks ends on a flat declaration, yours leaves the
reader wondering what happened...my feeling is that it is
about being asked to takes sides in some disagreement and
standing your ground on not making an uniformed judgement
despite a plea made to your loyalty.
I enjoyed both the reading and unraveling of this poem :-)
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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I can definitely see the influence of G. Brooks' "We Real Cool"
here - but found your take on it a bit more cryptic.
While Brooks ends on a flat declaration, yours leaves the
reader wondering what happened...my feeling is that it is
about being asked to takes sides in some disagreement and
standing your ground on not making an uniformed judgement
despite a plea made to your loyalty.
I enjoyed both the reading and unraveling of this poem :-)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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Hi Leineco,
I just couldn't get her, "We Real Cool" poem out of my head and kept coming back to it. I like your take on mine :) It is good to be a little cryptic ;) consider mine something of the steps we take to maintain a friendship, even when we don't agree.
Thanks for the thoughtful review!
Kim
Comment from honeytree
Love the art work a lot
for the words written
for these words.
We are human
We can doubt
we can feel sad
We can judge.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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Love the art work a lot
for the words written
for these words.
We are human
We can doubt
we can feel sad
We can judge.
Honey tree
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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Thank you for your lovely comments, Annie. :)
Kim
Comment from Unspoken94
I read both but this is my favorite. I love the way you have
designed the poem as I often do this as well. I am also so
appreciative of learning more about Gwendolyn Brooks. This
is such a wonderful piece and I loved the way you ended it. -Bill
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I read both but this is my favorite. I love the way you have
designed the poem as I often do this as well. I am also so
appreciative of learning more about Gwendolyn Brooks. This
is such a wonderful piece and I loved the way you ended it. -Bill
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hi Bill,
I only just discovered Gwendolyn Brooks yesterday, but I kept coming back to this particular poem of hers thinking, I really need to try that style. I think she was an amazing woman, and there is so much diversity in her styles of writing. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Kim
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Hi Kim,
I really like this style of poetry. It is brief but it has impact, with emphasis placed on the "I" (in this case). The artwork befits your write perfectly.
Thanks for sharing yet another poet's works with us, Kim! Much appreciated!
Connie
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hi Kim,
I really like this style of poetry. It is brief but it has impact, with emphasis placed on the "I" (in this case). The artwork befits your write perfectly.
Thanks for sharing yet another poet's works with us, Kim! Much appreciated!
Connie
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hi Connie,
I was reading about Gwendolyn Brooks and I kept coming back to her poem and thinking, I really need to try that lol Thank you for taking the time to read and leave your thoughts... I've had fun with the poets this month!
Kim
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You've done a great job, Kim! Not easy to come up with a poem each day.
Connie
Comment from BeasPeas
This is an interesting form, following that of Gwendolyn Brooks. I learn something from your posts about the styles of other poets. Once we declare ourselves as poets, anything goes and we can break all rules. I do like this one as well as the poem of hers that you included in author's notes. Simple, straightforward, meaning easy to grasp--my kind of poetry--and it is poetic. Image works well with your words. Marilyn
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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This is an interesting form, following that of Gwendolyn Brooks. I learn something from your posts about the styles of other poets. Once we declare ourselves as poets, anything goes and we can break all rules. I do like this one as well as the poem of hers that you included in author's notes. Simple, straightforward, meaning easy to grasp--my kind of poetry--and it is poetic. Image works well with your words. Marilyn
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hi Marilyn!
Ogden Nash sure proved that you can break the rules, and e e cummings, and Gwendolyn Brooks right behind them! lol I was reading her yesterday and just kept coming back to her poem thinking, I have to try that. Thanks for the wonderful review.
Kim
Comment from Pantygynt
If I had to choose between hers and yours I'd go for yours every time. I am not just trying to flatter you by saying that. Brooks' poem here is rich in black culture, which I don't pick up on. Wisely you, as a fellow caucasian have not tried to emulate thate facet of her writing. The result is something out of your own culture expressed in a similar style to Brooks but without the black ingredient. For the record I think you were absaolutely right to go about it this way.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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If I had to choose between hers and yours I'd go for yours every time. I am not just trying to flatter you by saying that. Brooks' poem here is rich in black culture, which I don't pick up on. Wisely you, as a fellow caucasian have not tried to emulate thate facet of her writing. The result is something out of your own culture expressed in a similar style to Brooks but without the black ingredient. For the record I think you were absaolutely right to go about it this way.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hi Pantygynt,
I felt like her style was catchy and impactful, I just couldn't resist trying something similar. I agree, it would be silly of me to try and emulate a culture that isn't mine. Taking an idea and making it mine, that's another story altogether ;)
Thanks for the awesome review!
Kim
Comment from CD Richards
This has all the steps to be a really good poem (sorry, couldn't resist that lame pun).
You're ok, even in spite of that myriad of faults - take it from someone who's practically perfect ;-)
Oh, I'm on a roll.
Excellent stuff, and very creative, Kim.
Craig
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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This has all the steps to be a really good poem (sorry, couldn't resist that lame pun).
You're ok, even in spite of that myriad of faults - take it from someone who's practically perfect ;-)
Oh, I'm on a roll.
Excellent stuff, and very creative, Kim.
Craig
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I read Gwendolyn Brooks' poem (featured in the author's notes) and I kept going back to it today, it just struck me... I may have to try a few variations of this one lol It was fun. I'm happy you like it. :) Consider it yours... just pull it out and read whenever you disagree with me lol we'll do just fine! ;)
*hugs*
Kim
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
A very dramatic style with the way it is written.
Nicely done. short but strong.
A poet I am not familiar with and thank you for the introduction.
A neat addition to your book
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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A very dramatic style with the way it is written.
Nicely done. short but strong.
A poet I am not familiar with and thank you for the introduction.
A neat addition to your book
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hi Barb!
Thank you for the great review. I just discovered her today and I kept coming back to her poem. She's quite diverse in her style, which is what prompted me to do two posts on her today. I really liked her. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Kim
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Quite lovely in presentation on the diagonal and in the repeating format of "I". I've not dealt in learning the various types of poetry, but I find this very interesting and pleasing to the eye. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Quite lovely in presentation on the diagonal and in the repeating format of "I". I've not dealt in learning the various types of poetry, but I find this very interesting and pleasing to the eye. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hi Mary,
Thank you for stopping by to read and comment. I read the poem that I modeled after by Gwendolyn Brooks today and just had to try something similar. I appreciate you taking time to review.
Kim