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Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Little Bitty the Hawaiian. Spider!"
A delightful Childen Lesson Book.

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Comment from candyfink
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This is an interesting, intriguing and a little educational writing. You are a great and talented writer. Thank you for sharing this chapter.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
    right here you are again this can you are and I really need one of yours and your view on your mind so I thought thank you for this wonderful review five stars I'd rather have it fried candy bars so what's your favorite by the way and do you know Lavinia you should read her profile you she says she has a dark secret and it's chocolate she's actually written a couple poems about chocolate so you should catch up to Lavinia and see what she has to say about your day my favorite candy bars change constantly for Mounds to Three Musketeers of course and since I'm much older than you and I used to get them back in the sixties when I was a child there only a nickel apiece and they were twice the size they are today and now they're like a king-size candy bar is like $2 tell me more about them chocolate isn't as if I asked for you he's react or whatever that word is and black chocolate they say helps with the serotonin in the brain chemicals thanks for this review Ted 24% your review
Comment from djeckert
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hey there seems to be a missing poem here Rick, unless its me missing something lol, hope you can fix it or set me straight anyways. God Blesses my friend

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
    Thanks got disstracted..
    Playmate of the Year wouldn't let me out of bed or write!
    Wanted sex!!!
    LOL!!!
    Ricky1024.
Comment from BruceMiller
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I certainly do not wish to look like some complaining idiot, but I get the feeling that something is missing here--and a second reading did not help. (lol) Cheers.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
    "The Playmate of the Year" (Misty) wouldn't let me out of bed or write!
    LOL!
    Ricky1024.
    (Depressed)