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"The Book of Jay 1984 to 2003"

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My Son Jason's Life.

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Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
Exceptional
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your words just make me sit at an aww I always read yours first because your words make my heart beat slow then fast sometimes at the same time

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2016
    thanks for that Abby the day that they were pulling Jason out of the car the fire man busted the window to point out that the pulley I was a kid out there with the jaws of life to the whole car was a mess you can imagine what it looks like hitting a telephone pole first a curve going up in this in the air in the pool that 10 feet up in the air and then coming down I heard both know it's only a block from my house you can imagine with the car must have looked like it after it was hit the pole over 80 miles an hour because it was locked in 3rd gear and with a race car Ford said it could have been going quite possibly faster but the my heart didn't go faster or slower it stopped when I saw them pulling they pulled him out and put him on the couch you can come too I thought it would that would bring them around and then you know that I know he was in the beginning stages of being raccoons along with severe, and then the moment brain damage brain swelling and lack of oxygen so we had to donate him thanks Ricky 1024
reply by Abby Wilson-hand on 02-Apr-2016
    you make my heart sing
Comment from jusylee72
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Good beginning to a story. Not sure where it will go but it has a lot of possibilities.
I like that you don't try to make him perfect. Just someone who needs to learn. Thank you so much

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2016
    why thanks jusy Lee really appreciate that Ricky 1024
Comment from JTStone
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It's a sad story when a parent writes about a child taken at such a young age...
He sounds like he was quite the boy, and you were/are the proud poppa.
I wish it were different for you.
Jimmy

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
    Thanks JT but God has tried...
    'And heaven knows...
    'I get by...
    Ricky 1024.