Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

"Reflections and Observations" is a great title for your book. I do like your prologue in which you state your purpose of life's observations. I think that's what writers do. We are, many times, more observers of life than participants in it. Your presentation is dynamic. I enjoyed reading this. Marilyn

 Comment Written 02-May-2016

---

reply by the author on 19-May-2016

Hi , Marilyn, thank you for your generous review. I have just returned home and apologise for the delay in my response. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Hi you just received thumbs up. Did you know you can vote for yourself? I like way your book talks about wisdom how people gain wisdom through experience and age. liberty justice

 Comment Written 02-May-2016

---

reply by the author on 19-May-2016

Hi Liberty, thank you for your generous review. I have just returned home and apologise for the delay in my response. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

reply by Liberty Justice on 19-May-2016

Hi! I love your title. How have you been dear poet fan friend? liberty justice

Comment from Lovinia

Excellent

Hi Marijka

You have written your prologues so poetically. A smooth read which creates interest in your book and draws the reader to ponder what you may offer us. I really enjoyed reading your POV on the subject of aging and gaining wisdom, and also realising we don't know as much as we thought we did. :)) We perhaps have the opportunity to reflect in greater depth than we may have had earlier with working, paying a mortgage and rearing children, and everything and anything that lends itself to the challenges of our lives. I love reading your view on showing consideration, kindness and respect, especially those who may be 'different', in whatever way; and perhaps the most difficult of all, agreeing to disagree with respect. An excellent concept for a book of poetry, you have a full heart Great Grandma. Huge hugs - Lovi xoxo

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2016

---

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

Hi Lovinia. Thank you so much for your comprehensive review of the Prologue of this book. I am pleased you enjoyed and my POV on aging. Thanks again, Lovi. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

I love this premise for your book of poems, Marijke! It is such a fantastic idea. I can't wait to see which styles of poetry you choose, as well as the issues/perspectives you decide to present. This is truly an exciting endeavor!

Good luck!

Kim

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016

---

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016

Thank you so much, Kim, for those kind words of encouragement. I hope I can keep up with the contest requirements and do it justice. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

Your prologue has piqued my curiosity!

to reflect on society as a whole, as well as areas of society which have made me stop and think.
sounds like a recipe for some pretty thought provoking poetry!

I look forward to watching your book grow and wish you the best in this endeavor!

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016

---

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016

Thank you so much, Leineco, I hope you enjoy the journey (and I hope I can meet the challenge!), Warmest regards, Marjke :o)

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for establishing the mood for your work with the ancient stones' photograph. I am pleased your poems will focus on wisdom and respect for others' points of view. Best wishes in the NaPoWriMo contest- Joan

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2016

---

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016

Thank you Joan, for your kind observations and generous rating, and for you good luck wishes... I will need them! Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

Hello Fiona,
I always find it interesting how society can shun differences, and yet... none of us are the same, are we? I'm certainly not.
I've made it a point, throughout my life to remain different and I'm with you.... find a POV which is extraordinary... and tout that. ;)
Well done, I will enjoy reading you.
Love and laughter, and let's get this party started!
Cat

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2016

---

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016

Thank you Catfor your kind observations and generous rating. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow

Excellent

Absolutely. I think you guys are taking on quite a challenge and I can't wait to read what all of you have to offer. Looking forward to your wisdom and perspectives on life.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2016

---

reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016

Thank you, Dawn. I just hope I can actually meet this challenge. Thanks and warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

I will look forward to your book of poems, JoAnn. This is an ambitious endeavor for those ho are attempting it. Good luck ith it, I like your plan

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2016

---

reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016

Thank you, DP, (but this is Marijke - aka Fionageorge). I appreciate your comments, and hope I can actually meet this challenge. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

reply by Douglas Paul on 31-Mar-2016

Ahhh sorry I got the name mixed up

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello Fiona :)
I really enjoyed the prologue to your book and look forward to reading your poetry as the challenge progresses.
A strong start to your entry. Very nicely written and presented.
Kindest regards, Debra :)

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2016

---

reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016

Thank you Debra, for your kind words of encouragement. I hope I can meet the challenge. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)