Tiny Tales of Terror
Viewing comments for Chapter 85 "The Knife in the Mirror"Multi-authored book of flash/micro horror fiction
15 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
A good entry into this multi-authored book. A tale of terror indeed. A trick gone wrong leading to real fear and terror. Nicely penned.
GMG
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Hi there,
A good entry into this multi-authored book. A tale of terror indeed. A trick gone wrong leading to real fear and terror. Nicely penned.
GMG
Comment Written 17-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Debbie :)
I love horror and tiny tales of terror are my favorite book collection. You did a good with this story about two sisters that fight all the time. The ending was surprising and very well written. Good job!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Hello, Debbie :)
I love horror and tiny tales of terror are my favorite book collection. You did a good with this story about two sisters that fight all the time. The ending was surprising and very well written. Good job!
Gypsy
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Thank you, my friend. Glad you liked it~Debbie
Comment from Dean Kuch
Heh-heh...I did like his Tiny Tale of Terror, very much so, Debbie. It's been awhile since anyone's posted a story in this series, and I was considering closing the book forever. However, if it remains a viable outlet for writers to spill out their darker tales of terror and woe on the page, or screen as it were, then perhaps I'll leave it open a while longer.
Great atmosphere set here, with the chanting and lighted candles, not to mention a spray of blood or two.
Thanks for another great edition. I do appreciate your continued contributions to OUR book.
Dean~~>
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Heh-heh...I did like his Tiny Tale of Terror, very much so, Debbie. It's been awhile since anyone's posted a story in this series, and I was considering closing the book forever. However, if it remains a viable outlet for writers to spill out their darker tales of terror and woe on the page, or screen as it were, then perhaps I'll leave it open a while longer.
Great atmosphere set here, with the chanting and lighted candles, not to mention a spray of blood or two.
Thanks for another great edition. I do appreciate your continued contributions to OUR book.
Dean~~>
Comment Written 15-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Please leave it open a bit longer. I never know when my warped mind might want to add to it. Glad you liked this one, my friend. Take care~Debbie
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As long as the book inspires people to write as it was intended to do, and as long as there are stories being added to the book, then I will leave the book open, Debbie.
Thanks for another fantastic edition to the book.
~Dean ;)
Comment from Realist101
Okay, Debbie! You're WICKED! LOL! I have to give a six because this is so original and just evil! What a horrible trick to play! Thanks for giving me something to warp my mind now, as I try to go to sleep! :D x
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Okay, Debbie! You're WICKED! LOL! I have to give a six because this is so original and just evil! What a horrible trick to play! Thanks for giving me something to warp my mind now, as I try to go to sleep! :D x
Comment Written 15-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Thank you again, my friend. Glad you liked it and I appreciate the stars~Debbie
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Debbie. Great little scary tale. I like the efffects you achieved with the use of such strong verbs to color the action.
I would suggest you take the format out of Italic format because whenever it's somebody's thoughts...they should be in italics....Like here: "Why didn't Catherine move out and leave her alone?" Either that or add "she thought to the statement. I suggest you dfo the story in standard roman though.
Grat story. I love it! Bob
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Hi, Debbie. Great little scary tale. I like the efffects you achieved with the use of such strong verbs to color the action.
I would suggest you take the format out of Italic format because whenever it's somebody's thoughts...they should be in italics....Like here: "Why didn't Catherine move out and leave her alone?" Either that or add "she thought to the statement. I suggest you dfo the story in standard roman though.
Grat story. I love it! Bob
Comment Written 14-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Thank you, my friend. Glad you liked it. Good idea. I do my poetry in italics. I just got a bit carried away, I guess~Debbie
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
You boooger you......!!!
Debbie, I was completely blind sided by this one.. Your imagination is amazing....
I am sure her sister didn't set out to have Catherine commit hairrry kary but she did.... Well, that's one way of getting the room all to herself...
Well done,
Carolyn
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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You boooger you......!!!
Debbie, I was completely blind sided by this one.. Your imagination is amazing....
I am sure her sister didn't set out to have Catherine commit hairrry kary but she did.... Well, that's one way of getting the room all to herself...
Well done,
Carolyn
Comment Written 14-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Thank you, my friend. Glad you liked it~Debbie
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Goodness me, Debbie, that was some horror tale! Talk about sisterly love, lol. I had to sleep with my sister, she was ten years younger than me and a flaming pest at times, I'm glad she didn't know any magic spells, lol! Well done, my friend. xsx Sandra x
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Goodness me, Debbie, that was some horror tale! Talk about sisterly love, lol. I had to sleep with my sister, she was ten years younger than me and a flaming pest at times, I'm glad she didn't know any magic spells, lol! Well done, my friend. xsx Sandra x
Comment Written 14-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Thank you, my friend. Glad you enjoyed it~Debbie
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Debbie
= Oooh! That sisterly love will get you every time.
= You are really getting the hang of of this horror and gore. (*<*)
= Great addition to the book, my friend.
= Keep 'em coming.
*Cheers & Blessings...*
Keep Smilin'... Jackie (*>*) Jax
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Hi, Debbie
= Oooh! That sisterly love will get you every time.
= You are really getting the hang of of this horror and gore. (*<*)
= Great addition to the book, my friend.
= Keep 'em coming.
*Cheers & Blessings...*
Keep Smilin'... Jackie (*>*) Jax
Comment Written 14-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Thank you, my friend. Glad you enjoyed it~Debbie
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Verrry good bit of flash fiction horror, Debbie. Catherine saw herself as a monster and stabbed--not her younger sister for the suppsed curse--but herself! Good twist at the end. Bravo!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Verrry good bit of flash fiction horror, Debbie. Catherine saw herself as a monster and stabbed--not her younger sister for the suppsed curse--but herself! Good twist at the end. Bravo!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Thanks again, Phyllis. I am sooo glad you liked it. Have a good evening, my friend~Debbie
Comment from patcelaw
He-he-he I enjoyed the read. A Dean wantabe me thinks You may need to work a little longer on becoming a Dean, but you are trying and that is what matters, I don't even dare trying to write scary stuff, because people would laugh at me. Patricia :-)
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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He-he-he I enjoyed the read. A Dean wantabe me thinks You may need to work a little longer on becoming a Dean, but you are trying and that is what matters, I don't even dare trying to write scary stuff, because people would laugh at me. Patricia :-)
Comment Written 14-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Thank you, my friend. Glad you enjoyed it~Debbie
